| "Awaiting the Warmth" Reviews/Comments [ 15 ] |
Reviewed By: thyme_cat [MediaMiner Member] On: June 19, 2005 19:40 CDT
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interesting. I look forward to updates. there are a few places where letters are missing makeing one word into another such as 'he' instead of 'her' and the like. good job on creativity, though that the hell Inuyasha is doing is anyone's guess.
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Reviewed By: White Tiger Princess - not logged in On: May 10, 2005 20:37 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love how this story is turning out!!! I really hope you update sometime soon!
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Reviewed By: parsnip [MediaMiner Member] On: March 15, 2005 23:13 CST
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Wow. Great story you've got going here! Loved it! I especially like the Sesshou/Kagome intereactions. Very interesting how you allowed him to be able to be telepathic by touch. Also, I can't wait to see how long it takes Kagome or Sesshoumaru to give in on the whole 'lord' issue. Keep up the good work! It's definitely not suffering from the long waits which is really quite amazing (I think). Hope your life gets less busy soon!
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Reviewed By: parsnip [MediaMiner Member] On: March 15, 2005 04:42 CST
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"A single red rose stood amongst the sea of white roses and green grass in the villa before her. And even in the dim light of the setting sun, the contrast was greatly distinguishable. Such a small dot, yet it stuck out like a sore thumb. ....So much of her green and Kikyo's white, but only one Inuyasha, one that could not possibly be shared between the two. ...Summer would fade, and winter would arrive. The red and white roses would disappear together, leaving only the green grass to wonder what had become of them as it stayed, left behind, as it always was, time after time...." I so love this analogy! I don't think I've heard anyone put it in such descriptive way before!! Okay, back to reading. . . .
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Reviewed By: Ryukotsusei [MediaMiner Member] On: December 19, 2004 04:01 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Update soon please, I look forward to reading future chapters!
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Reviewed By: Kelly Bean On: November 01, 2004 17:38 CST
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Hey this fic is really funny and exciting. Putting the subduing necklace around Sessomaru's neck is such a good idea. I hope you continue to write more cause I'll keep and eye out for you to update with the next chapter. I can see that you started this fic in May, and it's now October. So I will at least keep my fingers crossed that it won't take very long to update...maybe it was some type of beginners delayed writing syndrome and the illness is very nearly gone since you're already into chapter 4 :)
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Reviewed By: busoshwe [MediaMiner Member] On: October 31, 2004 20:56 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
The thought of Sessh having to wear the necklace is amusing in and of itself and to have him actually subdued by it is even more amusing. I look forward to the rest, keep up the great work! ^_^
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Reviewed By: akuma_river [MediaMiner Member] On: October 31, 2004 15:49 CST
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Coolsa. So let me guess her taste in weird food and ramen is that she is pregnant and moody but also carrying Inu? How else is he to get back then by reincarnation? Sic 'em. Love that part.
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Reviewed By: White Tiger Princess (not logged in) On: September 22, 2004 01:33 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is a great story! Can't wait for the next chapter, please update soon!
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Reviewed By: akuma_river *not signed in baka mm.org* On: September 21, 2004 21:45 CDT
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Badass. Keep up the awesome work. So how did Sess and Kagome hook up? And is Inu Kagome's baby? Cause you do know cheese and watermelon and then the ramen and mood swings = pregnancy. Keep up the awesome work.
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Reviewed By: o0ShadowXFox0o [MediaMiner Member] On: June 28, 2004 01:59 CDT
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I loved it. YOu've got a talent with putting words together. Hope you update soon. I'd love to see what happens next. May God bless you and good luck.
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Reviewed By: akuma_river (not signed in) On: May 16, 2004 02:59 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I like it. Two Pixie Sticks for you. I already know who they are. When I first read the first chap I thought that it would be their kids or decedents or something. But when chap two came along and I was a bit confused I went back and forth and saw the pattern. So let me ask you something is she having the weird cravings cause she is pregant? And that, that is also the reason for the writing down of the history of their relationship? I also loved the Roses and Grass anology. Very well done and thought out. Great job. Keep it up.
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Title: I think I got it...
Reviewed By: ice princess [MediaMiner Member] On: May 07, 2004 18:59 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I think I'm not too confused...if that makes sense 0_0. I have an idea of who the speakers are, based on the pairing of this fabulous fic *squee!!*, but I'll keep it to myself until it progresses. This has definitely piqued my interest!! Please keep it up!
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Reviewed By: ??? On: May 07, 2004 14:20 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
it is kind of confusing! but other than that it is ok! i will look for new chapters!
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Reviewed By: teenager15 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 07, 2004 07:44 CDT
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this is realy good, the past/prensent thing is't to hard to figuer out, and (if i'm right) its kind of obviouse that the present one is between S/K
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