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Reviewed By: rilo [MediaMiner Member] On: January 15, 2006 20:46 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 6 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
Very nice idea, very original. I love the contrasts in D's thinking, and the idea behind it. My only concern, really, is with the repeative nature of the lines. Yes, I understand that they're meant to be so, but the phrasing could use some work. Over-all, however, I enjoyed it. Good job.
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Reviewed By: Mala Darkling [MediaMiner Member] On: May 28, 2005 20:24 CDT
Comment/Review:
I love your drabble. *grin* You capture moods and thoughts and feelings and personalities so perfectly with so little effort and so few words. More drabble, more! ^_^
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Title: Well now...
Reviewed By: Kalia_Son [MediaMiner Member] On: June 29, 2004 13:25 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Thats quite a loveley peice of work there. I enjoyed it.
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Title: Well now...
Reviewed By: Kalia_Son [MediaMiner Member] On: June 29, 2004 13:25 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Thats quite a loveley peice of work there. I enjoyed it.
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Reviewed By: Kameko-chan [MediaMiner Member] On: June 21, 2004 23:18 CDT
Comment/Review:
Short, but gorgeous. ^_^ Those last couple lines especially were marvy, bravo!
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