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| "Happily Ever After" Reviews/Comments [ 3 ] | Title: that was cute
Reviewed By: ~Sango_Miroku13~ On: July 05, 2005 22:02 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
that was so cute. You wouldn't believe how many times I said awwwwwww!
| Reviewed By: DarklessVasion [MediaMiner Member] On: December 07, 2004 15:44 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Honey, you have GOT to write more. You have wonderful diction and phrasing. Your dialogue is heart warming and your understanding of the characters is spot-on. You must read the stories by Sueric here. I'm sure you will enjoy them. I cannot believe you only have one review for this...has no-one have any taste for reading a story that doesn't have 'smut' in it?!? I'm definately going to have to spread your name around and try to get others to read your work. I'm terribly impressed with your skill. Take a bow, I do not give praise lightly. *applause* ----This fic puts me in mind of two artists at deviantart, Devikuro and Giovannag, they did a pair of shared work inspired by the final episode 166-167, Using the Shard, The Bond of Two. One picture is called 'The Bond of Two' and the other is called 'Carrying You Home'. You simply must see these pictures (and all the rest of them) they are two of the best InuYasha fanartists out there (believe me, I've looked) If you're interested in more, contact me at darklessvasion(at)hotmail(dot)com. You really have to write more. You have real talent.
| Reviewed By: Principessa [MediaMiner Member] On: May 14, 2004 22:13 CDT
Comment/Review:
Okay, finally leaving you my first mm.org review! Anyway, I absolutely love this fic! It's so sweet, the happy ending that you've painted for Sango and Miroku (and Kohaku, of course.) It makes me think of the theme that "together we can get through this," which is a theme I really like. This is amazingly good. OTHER PEOPLE, READ THIS! And some other people beat me to giving you your first mm.org review :( Oh well, at least YOU got immediate reviews! Anyway, I can't wait to see your reviews of my fic once mm.org decides to, like, post them. Anyway, this is great!
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