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| "Déjà-vu" Reviews/Comments [ 4 ] | Reviewed By: kane-sakura [MediaMiner Member] On: May 30, 2004 13:02 CDT
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This story is by far one of the better ones I've read on mediaminer, but I am slightly confused. Is this guy the reincarnaiton of InuYasha? Is he really from another three centuries in the future? And are some of those big words even real?! Overall, this story has a good plot, good enemies, and a hot guy who looks like InuYasha. Try to check your grammar a little more before posting the story, that way it'll make more sense to all of your fans. Just a little friendly advice from a fellow writer. Keep up the good work!
| Reviewed By: Moon Child (is being mean *pouts*) On: May 28, 2004 19:42 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Your story is very... intriguing. I like it, A LOT. Though I am quite confused, but that's the whole point since we are seeing it from Kagome's prospective who is also very confused and only knows that they must get the Shikon. I can tell already that if you put this in the right direction this is going to be an aweseome fanfic. I liked it from the first chapter at how indepth it was. I'm still a bit confused about Xia (*can't remember her friends name*) and the importance of her as a character since it seemed you liked to stress about her. I'm sure she will become important later or you like to introduce characters in Kagome's life as in deep importance even if it doesn't have much importance to the story. Anyways, I'm just going on and on. Overall, its great. Very professional and unique. A storyline I've never seen, very intricate, and great opportunities. I'm waiting for the concluding flash back to read the desperation and tragedy of our Inuyasha and Kagome. I'm sure it'll be good and sad and I may cry (which for some reason I want to... I do need a good cry don't I...). For some reason I see coming next Kagome taking Yume shopping. One thing that keeps confusing me though is that isn't Yume the name of one of Kagome's friends in the modern world in the real story? I got a little confused a bit and kept picturing one of Kagome's friends... The confusing will pass the story is unraveled though to Kagome and the readers both. Keep updating and don't get writters block! I don't think you will though, you seem to have this very well planned. I wonder what else you've written...
| Reviewed By: Moon Child (It won't let me log in! O.o...) [MediaMiner Member] On: May 15, 2004 17:51 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really do like it. I want to put it on my favs but I can't!!! Mrrr...
| Reviewed By: QueenKagome [MediaMiner Member] On: May 13, 2004 16:40 CDT
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sweet! love it! pleeze pleeze pleeze update pleeeeeeeeez!?
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