| "The Demon Child" Reviews/Comments [ 9 ] |
Title: yo!
Reviewed By: fudge On: June 11, 2005 16:10 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Ok you have to defenetely update! this story is great keep up the great job!
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Reviewed By: Honebar On: June 08, 2005 08:44 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I don't often leave reviews but with this story I just had to. Its nice and original. grins. All in all I give you a 9 out of 10. The story was very easy on the eyes and entertaining. My only complaint is that one of your chapters was cut off in mid sentance.
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Reviewed By: xXchibiXx On: March 03, 2005 22:41 CST
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dis story is awesum~ its kool dat u made the world of Ruruoni Kenshin into a vampire/werewolf sort of thing. Great job! Update soon, so i could shower u with compliments ^^
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Reviewed By: kenshinnnn On: January 14, 2005 19:57 CST
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ARE YOU EVER GOING TO UPDATE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! |
Reviewed By: cool girl On: January 12, 2005 21:32 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This fanfic is really good!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! please please update soon.
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Title: Cool!
Reviewed By: smalfoy [MediaMiner Member] On: January 10, 2005 19:15 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hey this is defintely a great story, and I can't wait to read more. But you should know that the Prologue (which is mostly the same as Ch3) isn't complete and its hard to read. The same goes for Chapter 5, it cuts off and it makes the next chapter hard to understand. There was a whole new character that i hadn't read about, and Megumi giving her some sort of shampoo...I don't know, anyways you might want to fix that up a bit. But great premise, I can't wait to see more. Good job!
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Reviewed By: Ladydot On: November 11, 2004 18:51 CST
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Wow!! i really lvoe thsi story you have going, very excellent indeed! please keep writting and get updated soon. Again the story is fantastic witht he best story line i've seen in awhile.
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Reviewed By: hariko_tanaka [MediaMiner Member] On: October 05, 2004 07:55 CDT
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it's really nice....aoshi,a vampire???he must look great!!!*drool*
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Reviewed By: hikaru1617(to lazy to log in right now) On: September 29, 2004 19:19 CDT
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Keep it up!! I love this story..it's really good. I'm just trying to figure out who will end up with who. lol
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