| "The First Date is the Most Important" Reviews/Comments [ 7 ] |
Title: XD
Reviewed By: orange_ninja [MediaMiner Member] On: May 03, 2006 22:41 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
SO CUTE!!! @_@ please write a neji/tenten fanfic! I;'d love to see the way you do it! XD!
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Title: update soon
Reviewed By: kunai [MediaMiner Member] On: February 28, 2006 14:09 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i demand an update
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Title: Infuriation
Reviewed By: Scumble On: October 04, 2004 05:24 CDT
Comment/Review:
Hmmm... Weeeell I guess I should go through with my promise, THEN I'll actually review. Kay? Scumble: An extremely strong kind of alcohol made by leaving a barrel of apples in water to freeze through winter. What's left over is a tiny core of alcohol. That is Scumble. Now, on to the review. Again, I'm not good with rating stuff, so I'll just comment- I liked the first chapter more, the new one really is too short for my liking. The thing with her teammates was a bit odd, but I can beleive it. Writing Hinata is easy, if you follow these easy steps: stutter at least once every sentence, never double stutter unless she is really shocked. Plenty of "..." now and then never hurt. Look around a lot, look at the ground a bit, blush, avoild eye contact with Naruto unless really surprised. As for what to do next... I dunno, you're a writer, right? Make some stuff up! Overall I like your fanfiction! *makes "Nice Guy Pose" as his teeth flash*
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Title: Impatience
Reviewed By: Scumble On: July 12, 2004 04:29 CDT
Comment/Review:
Well, I'm not good with rating stuff, so I'll just put a comment- I like it! Are ya gonna write more, are ya, are ya, are ya?! Please do. If you do... I'll tell you what my name means. AND I'll be your friend! :D
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Reviewed By: Nakama [MediaMiner Member] On: May 30, 2004 18:52 CDT
Comment/Review:
Lovely. ^^ NarutoxHinata's an adorable couple.
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Reviewed By: Mr. Gentleman On: May 16, 2004 03:01 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Subarashii. I also like Hinata x Naruto fanfictions. I want to see the next chapter. Keep up the excellent work. *claps for respectful ammount of time*
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Reviewed By: temjinxzarron [MediaMiner Member] On: May 16, 2004 01:06 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
It's a really good start so far. Please continue!
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