| "Oeastre" Reviews/Comments [ 6 ] |
Reviewed By: Serena1985 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 13, 2010 05:14 CST
Comment/Review:
That was great! Your fic sucked me in and held me captive until the end. Keep up the great work!!
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Reviewed By: Athnyha On: March 18, 2007 04:31 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 6 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Awesome! Loved the pairings, and loved the plot. I know the holidy as Ostara, so I liked the little explanation at the end to clear up any possible confusion. The descriptions were beautiful, it felt like I was really there. An overall great fic. Thanks ^_^
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Reviewed By: moimoi-chan not signed in On: March 05, 2006 09:49 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
i love this...although i may be biased because i love when ban-chan is uke....i'm curious though as the beginning notes say that this is a sequel...was that to another fanfic? because i couldn't find it...
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Reviewed By: Tamababys baby [MediaMiner Member] On: July 31, 2004 17:50 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Loved it! Shounen ai!
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Reviewed By: Cyfris [MediaMiner Member] On: May 20, 2004 19:06 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hee, cute! i liked it a lot, the whole shebang came along nicely and there weren't any loose ends (that i can see) very enjoyable, good work!
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Reviewed By: Me-Nuriko [MediaMiner Member] On: May 19, 2004 11:47 CDT
Comment/Review:
First I want to say that I liked it. You made good descriptions of the ritual and the sex scene and so on. You even had a reason for them to get into bed with each other. I have one thing to complain about though. When Ban meets Maria for the first time since he ran away as a kid, Ginji (and more) meets her, too. So when you wrote that Ginji didn't know who Maria was, it was very disturbing in an otherwise quite good fic. And it wasn't necessary for the story to let Ginji be unaware of her. The story would be the same even if you changed a few lines to make your fic follow canon. Another thing I liked with your fic, was that you had the proper pairings, the ones that are more or less shown or hinted at in the manga/anime. I hope you don't feel bad about the small criticism, because as I said, I did like it.
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