| "The Spirit Assassin" Reviews/Comments [ 11 ] |
Reviewed By: Hopeful [MediaMiner Member] On: June 03, 2004 20:57 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Update please! I think it's really good! i like to see what happens in the next chapter and it's interesting.
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Reviewed By: Anime_FanGirl [MediaMiner Member] On: May 30, 2004 11:20 CDT
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I wonder what happens in the next chap. Please update!
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Reviewed By: foxdog [MediaMiner Member] On: May 25, 2004 19:38 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hi me again how ya doin. yep still have the motabolizm of a tooth pick, but the tooth pick rusted and now a cobweb takes it's place. your story's great update soon
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Reviewed By: Katsuko* On: May 25, 2004 18:09 CDT
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cool story update soon please
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Reviewed By: Anime_FanGirl [MediaMiner Member] On: May 25, 2004 15:08 CDT
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This is a great story. Continue ASAP!
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Reviewed By: Nella On: May 23, 2004 15:01 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
PLEASE KEEP WRITTING! I reallly wanna know what hapens next!
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Title: Chapter 3
Reviewed By: Shimmering Rosewater [MediaMiner Member] On: May 23, 2004 00:10 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
hey this is an interesting story. please keep going with it. but um, is the reader supposed to be Ryo? b/c you listed this story as a 'self-insertion'. i just want to be sure i read this correctly.lol. but anyhoo, please update soon!
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Reviewed By: weird0 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 20, 2004 16:39 CDT
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What kind of office? Oh yeah, and also, looks can be deceiving! Keep writing!
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Reviewed By: sharha On: May 20, 2004 06:52 CDT
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PLEASE WRITE MORE!!! ITS SOOO GREAT!!!
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Reviewed By: DBK On: May 19, 2004 20:30 CDT
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Ooooohhhh...I like...Good start fur ya first ficcie...keep writing and i'll keep reviewing...luvin every minute of it!
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Title: how ya doin
Reviewed By: foxdog [MediaMiner Member] On: May 19, 2004 15:34 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I know what it's like. checking your profile I registered same day as you. But I already three stories up (which don't recommend it unless you have lots of time or some are done. Me ,on the other hand, I'm just an idiot who has the metabolism of an toothpick. Love your story, Keep at it P.S: this was not my life story
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