| "The romance of the blue dragon" Reviews/Comments [ 7 ] |
Title: the romance of the blue dragon
Reviewed By: drigger's mate tyson On: June 15, 2005 13:25 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 5 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
tyson / robert or tala . ggggggggggrrrrrrrr not kai no no no me no like mr i have a stick up my ass to well
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Title: Great Fic
Reviewed By: Rhbadcat [MediaMiner Member] On: October 27, 2004 09:01 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Please update soon cos i think you've got a great fic going here i think it would be great for Robert and Tyson to go out only for Tyson to be seduced by Kai. Great fic and let me compliment you on your ability to draw the reader into the story! congrats!
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Reviewed By: Jagwarakit [MediaMiner Member] On: June 13, 2004 01:34 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 5 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great story so far. I really hope you update soon. Might I make a suggestion? How 'bout getting Oliver in the act? For some reason I can see a TyOl paring. I mean Oliver likes cooking and all and it's said that a way to a man's heart is through his stomach. It's just a thought though. Any ways, great story.
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Reviewed By: me On: June 06, 2004 00:05 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hi! Love the story. Love the thought of a Ka/Ty but is it possible to make it a Ty/Ta one? I've only ever seen one of those around?
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Reviewed By: out_of_control On: June 06, 2004 00:03 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love the story - it's new, fun and interesting. I would hope you contine with the story and I would love you update soon please.
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Reviewed By: YamiAmi [MediaMiner Member] On: June 05, 2004 22:00 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 6 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Its very funny. And I support TYRO and TYTA,so ethier is fine with me. Saioynara! P.S:If you could avoid making this a TYKAI, Id'e appreciate it.
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Reviewed By: Dreamers On: May 25, 2004 19:07 CDT
Comment/Review:
It would be interesting to see Takao go out with Robert and then have Kai seduce him away
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