| "Silent Heart" Reviews/Comments [ 3 ] |
Reviewed By: Spirit Nova On: November 18, 2004 16:06 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Please write more the story is a great idea Ranma Nexus of Order that new. Ranma and Hotaru I would love to see that one. So please write more ASAP.
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Reviewed By: an author On: May 22, 2004 13:43 CDT
Comment/Review:
i like it a lot and yes learn how to paragraph things. makes for easier reading. that and it tells where one person leaves off and another starts talking. read a real book to get some ideas on how to paragraph. that and read some other fanfiction as well. not to be mean just to let you know how to make it look better.
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Reviewed By: XStylusTAW On: May 22, 2004 12:11 CDT
Comment/Review:
Not a bad story at all, and I look forward to reading another chapter. However, please PLEASE learn paragraphing!
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