| "Fear Factor" Reviews/Comments [ 16 ] |
Reviewed By: Angel of forgotten souls [MediaMiner Member] On: June 08, 2006 17:22 CDT
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okay, here's a good one. One at a time, they are hooked to a rope thing and have to climb to the top of a rocky cliff, there are three small holes in diferent places of the cliff, inside of each of them is a box which contains a key. After collecting all of the keys they have to climb to the top off the cliff where there is a large metal door, they unlock the door and go inside, where there is a camra so the others can see. Anyway, inside there is a machine that randomly selects and hands them a plastic egg. They have to crack open the egg and eat whatever is inside, which can be spiders, worms, etc. If you arn't going to use this idea tell me so I can. You have a great start so far. Good luck!
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Title: OOH I KNOW!
Reviewed By: DG32173 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 27, 2004 16:32 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i'll e-mail ya the stunt. it's gonna be COOL! ~.^ it'll be so gross that one of the tentei will have to back out!! actually, i came up with about three different stunts: one action; one extremely gross, like i said earlier; and one really hard. so i have an idea as to what whe could do. but don't you know that there are supposed to be 8 people in the games, not seven. you only put in seven people, three girls and four guys; there are supposed to be four of each gender! i can deal with the action and gross but i don't know if even my demented mind can handle the extremely hard one. i'll email 'em to ya!
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Reviewed By: silver_neko_kitsune [MediaMiner Member] On: August 09, 2004 14:06 CDT
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This story is really good, I luv it! Here's a stunt: send the group to Africa[like in a small rocket so it'll only take 15 mins], put the group into a small cave, the cave is going to have seperate narrow passages and everyone goes takes seperate passages and they have to combat crawl a LONG way, then when they reach the end,they will reach Mount Elgon [which is a real mountain] and they'll have to climb to Kitum cave [Kitum cave once had a deadly virus called Marburg, a filovirus, like ebola] go through Kitum cave and when they reach the end there'll be a cliff [this parts not true], when its dark, they climb down the cliff, into the rainforest. There will be seperate paths and each person will take a seperate path. There will be obstacles such as giant pits of poisunus scorpions, demon attacks, animal attacks [but they can't kill the animals], and there will be poisinus animals in the jungle[lets say, we had a cure for each one] they will do this part in the dark of night also, so they are more prone to danger. Um,when they reach the pit of poisunus scorpions, they must take one and carry it for the rest of they way back WITH THEIR BARE HANDS. Um... they have to make it back alive... I know this sounds really REALLY unlikely, but my mind can be demented. Its just a thought.
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Reviewed By: xxDyingInsidexx [MediaMiner Member] On: August 01, 2004 11:38 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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well, i duno how good this idea will be but here it goes - the group should go in this spinning room (it's up in the air)and they have to find their way out (it's pitch black) and they will be timed on how long it will take them. the way out is through a trapped door on the floor and once they go through they land in a pile of mud-ish stuff and they have to do some kind of an obsacle course, and they will be times ... who ever has the worse time umm you can choose their penalty or whatever since it's your story ... i hoped i helped a bit !!
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Reviewed By: DemonandGoddess [MediaMiner Member] On: July 31, 2004 23:30 CDT
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Ugh...action stunts. What could they do that would actually be hard/scary?Bungee jumping off a cliff filled arsenic filled water and sharp pointy objects hidden under the arsenic filled water. Yeah. That's all I could think off. ;;;^^ Ok, update soon!
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Title: go go go go!
Reviewed By: Lya [MediaMiner Member] On: July 08, 2004 10:46 CDT
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i liked it! keep on writing! ^_^ as one of my friends say - GO GO GO GO GO!
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Reviewed By: DemonandGoddess [MediaMiner Member] On: July 08, 2004 02:03 CDT
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Cool, an update! Ideas: Enduring evil fanfics containing insane pairings(ex. Kuwabara/Kurone/a koala). So basically MSTing...ooh! Have the writers with them too! Or covering themselves with garlic and blood, then acting as a stripper for vampires. What? It's an idea! Ok, a more sane idea: Strip-dancing to 'Toxic' in front of insane fan girls. Yes, I like the thought of them stripping. A lot of girls do. Ok, more ideas... programming a VCR, the one thing that the smartest of engineers is unable to do. Sorry, it's hard to think of action stuff for them to do, since they could probably bungee jump and stuff without any problems. ithink you should leave it in regular writing form. Ok, hope you use one of my ideas. Update soon!^-^
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Reviewed By: MiaDragon On: July 07, 2004 14:17 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
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XD funny so far. can't wait to see more. ^^
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Reviewed By: Emiko Hyuga [MediaMiner Member] On: July 07, 2004 13:36 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is pretty funny, you should add more.
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Reviewed By: iplaywithfire [MediaMiner Member] On: June 12, 2004 01:28 CDT
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its good its good its good! continue it please !!! ^_^
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Reviewed By: foxdog [MediaMiner Member] On: June 04, 2004 13:33 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
try this one survive a mob of fangirls (thats gonna be real hard for kuwabaka)
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Reviewed By: DemonandGoddess [MediaMiner Member] On: June 03, 2004 18:32 CDT
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The evils of pop up ads! Hmm... this looks cool. I wanna find out what happens! Update soon plz.
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Reviewed By: Hiei Fan Girl On: June 02, 2004 16:05 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
jin and touya should be in this story
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Reviewed By: likes to stare at flames On: May 31, 2004 10:19 CDT
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Darn you to hell pop up adds you claim another victim and im here to see this to the end!!
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Reviewed By: foxdog [MediaMiner Member] On: May 27, 2004 15:41 CDT
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C'mon update Plz I wanna see what happens next
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Reviewed By: foxdog [MediaMiner Member] On: May 24, 2004 15:31 CDT
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I can't wait to see what happens. I also can't wait to see what Hiei, Kurama, and Kookubura do to Yusuke for signing them up. Please update soon Foxdog
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