| ""Shards of Our Memories": The Soap Opera" Reviews/Comments [ 50 ] |
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Reviewed By: TwistedEvilStapler [MediaMiner Member] On: August 27, 2004 14:39 CDT
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"Plot devices dashed her hopes" I really like that. Not to mention the rest of your story; it was very good too! With so many Inuyasha fanfics out there, it's hard to come up with something even resembling original, but this story's been presented in a unique way, and that's just awesome. You do an excellent job with details too - not too little, not too much. And your characters are 'reasonably in character.' That is to say, they stick with their personalities, but the fact that they've lead different lives fits into their character as well. My only complaint - only three more chapters!? Oh well, I'm looking forward to them.
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Title: shards of our memory
Reviewed By: justi gordon On: August 26, 2004 17:56 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
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Reviewed By: szmadad [MediaMiner Member] On: August 21, 2004 17:17 CDT
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Oh my god girl! You turned me into mush with that kissing scene from "Passions" Talk about burning down a house with intensity! Wooh! Inu and Kag want each other...wonderful..and can't wait to see more of it! This whole soap theme is really cute..you're doing a great job with it!
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Reviewed By: shriylon On: August 21, 2004 03:00 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 7 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
first off, I'm laughing my head off. second, you've got to update before...I come after you with something...big and..pointy! Oh yeah, you know I will. *attempts glare* in all seriousness, this is a really great fic. I love your sense of humor, and while I hate soaps with a passion, it's fun to read. Inu Yasha seems a bit more dramatic than he usually is, but other than that your character writing is wonderful! I especially loved 'hoho' and his acting prowess... ^_^ see you next chapter~
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Title: so close
Reviewed By: ws03 On: August 20, 2004 22:43 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
kikyo was almost out of the picture, why did you write that part? update soon please.
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Reviewed By: earthshine411 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 20, 2004 20:07 CDT
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*snickers* I love the title of the latest update, "Miroku's Hope". Cracked me up, that silly little houshi. I agree with your choice on dinner dates. Though I think it'd be fun to go somewhere with Shippou (not like that, hentai). Go to Chuck-E-Cheese's or Bullwinkle's or something. Some fun, kid place. I think Shippou's adorable. In fact.. where _is_ Shippou? No cameo in this fic? (Or maybe he's been around, and I've just forgotton? Hmm.. I'll have to do some re-reading.) Hehe. Anyway. Sigh.. Inuyasha... getting caught up on memories. As always, pushing Kagome away to play second fiddle. Oh well. I guess it's best if he resolves old issues before moving on. I feel for Kagome, though. Probably wondering if she imagined everything that happened, and trying to tell herself to forget it. *sly grin* I'd like to see s'more Kagome/Kouga action, just to rile up Inuyasha and have him realize his feelings for Kaggers. Excellent update, the other day I was wondering when you were going to put up another chapter. Thank you! Keep up the great work. ^^
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Title: :D!!!
Reviewed By: Chibi Rouyakan [MediaMiner Member] On: August 07, 2004 17:26 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Aw man, what I wouldn't give to be Kagome... *dreamy sigh*.... *comes back to reality* Eh?! Oh. Awesome!! 10!! 110% Greatness!!!! I'm not making any sense, am I?!!!! Who cares?!!! I love this story!!!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: lovin' it On: August 07, 2004 00:01 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
LoL I luv this chapter, u have no idea. YOU GO! lol i luv it luv it luv it, especially when koga caught them lol tee hee plz update soon!
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Reviewed By: earthshine411 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 05, 2004 02:57 CDT
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*attempts to stop drooling* Lovely update! Now that it's over, I have two words for you: Kouga Repercussions! Kouga obviously feels he and Kagome are "together", I think he should start his jealousy-bit! Let him and Yasha get it settled out. I like how Miroku gains some progress with Sango. I was wondering about Sess and Rin, if anything happened between them when she came to the station to visit Kagome. I'd like to see where that went. Anyway. Keep up the great work, and update when you can! ^,^
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Reviewed By: Precious [MediaMiner Member] On: August 03, 2004 10:27 CDT
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I'm still here. And your chapters have been wonderful. In the other chapter with the signing I see that the public has made the connection that Kagome and Kikyo look alike. I can just imagian what those people will say now that they have had to do a sex scene together. Love the way they got so lost into each other that they were "add-libbing" their movements. After the brillant performance Hiten and Sesshomaru will definatly want them to do it again. I wonder how InuYasha felt since it was mostly written from Kagome's POV. And poor Koga. I know he will ask Kagome what he walked in on. Of course she'll say they were only praticing but then Koga will ask her why they never practiced their scenes together. Can't wait to hear her comeback for that one! Be looking for your next chapter. Keep up the good work.
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Title: Fantastic
Reviewed By: Rosepetals9 On: August 02, 2004 18:06 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Your story is so good! I love the way you can describe the heat and passion between the two (Inuyasha and Kagome) are acting on stage...I almost get lost in the story, please keep writing! You're great!
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Reviewed By: kj On: August 02, 2004 14:43 CDT
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wow that was a pretty good limey scene considering they were on camera makes you wonder what could happen if they didnt have a camera in their faces...wink wink, lol i love the story plz continue lol till then ja ne
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Reviewed By: Nifster On: July 26, 2004 00:27 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OMG OMG OMG I love this story it's my absolute FAVORITE, plz update soon, lol i really want to read the next chapter!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: earthshine411 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 24, 2004 01:42 CDT
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And the plot thickens.. ^,^ ...evilness! Seducing Kag? Fun times for Yasha. I wonder how Kouga'll take it...? The latest update is great; can't wait for another!
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Title: Great Story
Reviewed By: Me Myself And Inu [MediaMiner Member] On: July 23, 2004 22:25 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love how Inuyasha defends Kagome, but will chew her out for going out with Kouga. It's nice to finally see Inuyasha coming out of his shell and I'm just imagining what will happen with their next scenes. Keep writing, I love reading this story!
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