| ""Shards of Our Memories": The Soap Opera" Reviews/Comments [ 50 ] |
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Reviewed By: Shaid [MediaMiner Member] On: June 07, 2004 22:19 CDT
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great fic so far. I think it could turn out really good. Please write more soon!
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Reviewed By: Precious [MediaMiner Member] On: June 03, 2004 23:03 CDT
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Well those two chapters were interesting. I like the way you remember to keep Kagome nervous and naive. I'm sure she will relax so enough. I like the way you worked in Sango. And everyone is so confident in Kagome's skills. I smell a accident involoing Kikyo was the reason InuYasha left acting in the first place. I wonder how Koga will take being replaced. Maybe they will let him play another part. Nice touch making Naraku a laywer. Sesshomaru was a bit cocky but hey if it's true...it's true. I wanted to say something else but I forgot. Anyway, I'll keep reviewing since it appears everyone else is to lazy to do so.
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Reviewed By: BlackX On: May 29, 2004 04:08 CDT
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This sure is a good start. I like the way you're taking your time building this story. I just read the other reviews and I have to say I'd rather see Inuyasha as the (outwardly) rough jerk with great acting skills than as just the ladies` man. It would reflect his character in the series much better, though the second option might be logical seeing that his brother is the producer. And Kouga really is in character here ("my woman")... ;-). Anyways, keep going.
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Reviewed By: Precious [MediaMiner Member] On: May 26, 2004 21:10 CDT
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This story could have much promise. The plot is open to a variety of ideas. I hope that it will be as tantalizing as I presume it to be. I am also a romance freak. And I love the classic couples. Both the soap opera and the "real life" sides of this fic will be unconsciously interacting and affecting each other. I am wondering how Miroku, Sango, and Rin will come to play larger parts in the story seeing as most of the focus will be on set. Can't wait to see what you have lined up for that. And I'm caught between InuYasha being a heart throb ladies man or a rough but respected jerk with great acting skills. I'm sure one of these will have to be his personality. As for the rest of the cast, I will do my best to guess who will play what as the story goes along. I'm sure that it Koga is in here he will play InuYasha's rival for Kagome. (As he is best suited for.) Yura will play the slut that she is. I don't really see Shippo in here but it is possible to slip him in. And that is all the guessing I will do in this review. Be looking for you next chapter! And once a week is positively fine with me.
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Reviewed By: anoNymousreader On: May 25, 2004 19:22 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
COOL!!!! this fic is really funny and i cant wait to read the rest. miroku is such a perv. n-e-wayz plz update soon!
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