| "Vacation from the Ordinary" Reviews/Comments [ 5 ] |
Reviewed By: purplechaos04 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 14, 2004 09:59 CST
Comment/Review:
Interesting =) Though it didn't make sense why Kaiba and Jou would be all of a sudden kissing and then fucking, at least you somewhat addressed that afterwards. ::cries:: I want a plushie!!!
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Reviewed By: animAlameo On: September 06, 2004 13:53 CDT
Comment/Review:
"Kaiba," the blonde called. "Do you realize what we just did?" A grunt. "We had sex, moron. Haven't you heard of it?" loved this part...not like i didn't like the other stuff in it to. :P i really like how u put your own thing to the whole convo after sex. usually ppl are like "i love you" and "i love you too" or just they fall asleep -_-" luv ya
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Title: OooooooooooKkkkkkkkkkkk
Reviewed By: HappyDragon(logged out) On: August 18, 2004 02:15 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Don't get me wrong, I really enjoyed reading this. But I'm wondering how it could have " . . . started out as a MalikxBakura, then it became JouxMalik involving cell phones, but then it ended at this." I sort of want to see the other fics now. Actually I want to see a continuation of this or something, but that's just my own insanity. ^.^ Anyway, have a mystery box with a random plushie of your own choosing inside and keep up the wonderful writing.
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Reviewed By: silen [MediaMiner Member] On: June 21, 2004 18:10 CDT
Comment/Review:
nice fic
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Reviewed By: Lully-chan On: May 26, 2004 23:50 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
^_^ Hehehe. >D Normally I don't read Seto/Jou, but I decided to take a break from studying for finals and read this. Nice job on the lemon~ I feel like I want to read more Seto/Jou. o.O Strange... You say this could have been Jou/Malik? So I'm not the only one who likes that pairing after all...? n.n;
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