| "Goku and Vegeta's Nightmare" Reviews/Comments [ 3 ] |
Title: hehe..
Reviewed By: bura400(not signed in) On: June 01, 2005 16:21 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
That was an extremely amusing and a fun read! I loved it! ^_~ Keep up the great work. Tara/Bura
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Reviewed By: vegetaspixie [MediaMiner Member] On: June 01, 2004 09:50 CDT
Comment/Review:
Ahahahaha! That reminds me of when they were in Maijin Buu's body...they acted the same way too. Im glad that you managed to write something like this without the characters going too OOC. I really enjoyed the small Vegeta-kun part....when I was thinking of his voice I just imagined him on helium, and the result was an extremely funny voice. Well, I wish you would have put in a little more things that the boys would have done to torture Vegeta and Son, but I understand why u ended it where you did. Nice job!
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Reviewed By: Cauli [MediaMiner Member] On: May 27, 2004 19:31 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Happy purple dinousaur ^_^ I'm obsessed
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