| "You Can't Escape the Past" Reviews/Comments [ 3 ] |
Reviewed By: DG32173 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 08, 2004 08:02 CDT
Comment/Review:
CONTINUE!!! I LOVE DA FICCIE!! PLEASE CONTINUE!! i hope kei and kurama will both be alright! don't you dare let them die! oh, and who the heck is this mysterious person? it can't be sakyo! can it? I'M CONFUSED! mostly at who the mage is and who the mysterious person is! i hate being confused! so hurry up and continue the story!
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Title: Love It
Reviewed By: Kurama Is Mine Forever (name is Kasumi) On: July 31, 2004 18:59 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is such a cool story but why didn't you put it up on fanfiction??? I need you to write a lot more hurry!!!::starts running around form anxiety:: Oh and where are the disclaimers?? I love the disclaimers. ^__^ and kurama is mine 4-ever. I just wanted to hug and kiss all the time in the disclaimers in the last To Come Back. He's so cute with his red hair and green eyes. Hehehe!!^__^
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Reviewed By: foxdog [MediaMiner Member] On: May 31, 2004 23:04 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
in the first chapter you're absolutly right, What does Hiei see in her I'm sooo jeales(I suck at spelling). again Why hasn't anyone commented on this
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