|
| "The Silent Blade" Reviews/Comments [ 8 ] | Reviewed By: starlight_dragon [MediaMiner Member] On: February 29, 2008 01:15 CST
Comment/Review:
Wow. This is a really interesting story! I hope to see more soon.
| Reviewed By: blondebrat2006 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 15, 2006 19:59 CDT
Comment/Review:
this fic is really good. u really need 2 update it though. its been 2 years & u said that u still had 4 more chapters u wanted 2 write. i hope u update this soon. its a good fic, & i wanna c how it turns out.
| Reviewed By: Kakashi/Iruka Lover #? On: April 24, 2005 15:48 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Yay!!! What a neat fic!!! Oh, I do hope that you continue it... I noticed all too late that you haven't updated since June of 2004....... *sigh* Hey, you mentioned that you're French, right? That's really neat, because I'm learning French right now... I've only taken 3 years of it (due to moving, etc, etc.), but I actually plan to major in French during college. The reason I'm mentioning this? If you don't have a beta reader by now (which you probably do, but still...) I'm volunteering! Yup, I beta a lot of my friends' fics, and I couldn't help but notice several grammar mistakes in the previous chapters which no doubt stem from having French as your native language. Soooooo, because I "know" French, and am quite good at English (or so I am told), I just though it would be a neat opportunity for the both of us. Just let me know if you're interested... (you can e-mail me at multifacetedtune@writeme(dot)com if you are) ^___^ Keep up the good work, and update ASAP, okay? This is a really neat idea, and you have written in quite well!!! ^___^ Bye!!!
| Reviewed By: Duae On: April 17, 2005 13:03 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really enjoyed this, hope it updates soon. And as the last bit in the last chapter, yes there's semi-canon for Kakashi's eating. There's a whole episode dedicated to the three trying to peek under his mask... 120? As part of it they treat him to ramen, there's a split second of distraction, and then ramen is gone. The whole episode is on crack.
| Reviewed By: May-VeggieGirl1 (too lazy to login) On: July 05, 2004 21:04 CDT
Comment/Review:
It's a little late to wish you luck, neh? Oh well. Good update, I'm liking this more and more.
| Reviewed By: May-VeggieGirl1 (2 lazy 2 sign in) On: July 05, 2004 15:13 CDT
Comment/Review:
omg, did that really happen with the teacher? LOL, I didn't like the begining but I saw u updated and decided to read on. ^_^ Kakashi's my fav, but he should have used the Sharingan after his facemask broke...oh well, I'll read the next chapter and review that too.
| Reviewed By: May-VeggieGirl1 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 06, 2004 14:21 CDT
Comment/Review:
One more note: Linkin Park rocks! ;p
| Reviewed By: May-VeggieGirl1 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 06, 2004 14:17 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hey, first review for mm.org! Yay! ^_~ It's interesting. The only reason I'm not really embracing it is because I dun like much yaoi/shonen-ai. Especially with Iru/Kak because I can not see them together. There's barely any relation other than being Naruto's teacher at one point or another. I could even see Gai/Kak but just not Iruka. Anyways, your a great author, with very good us eof words in most places. There are some areas that could use help, but other than that your great! (It's amazing how someone from another country can write fanfiction better than those born and raised with this language) So anyways, great story! The creativity's an 8 cause a lot of people make Iru/Kak fics. Please read my fic I'm going to post soon called Pain of War, cause everyone has their own ideas about Kakashi-kun's (or anyone elses in anime/manga) past. ^_^ Later!
|
|
|
