| "A New Character" Reviews/Comments [ 4 ] |
Reviewed By: Satens_Killer_Gods_Angel [MediaMiner Member] On: September 19, 2005 17:54 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i really do wish youd stop with the damn cliff hangers arrgggggg... they get me sooo axinos to read then u do a cliffy. >_< so not right!
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Reviewed By: Satans Widdle Hellper [MediaMiner Member] On: July 22, 2004 20:06 CDT
Comment/Review:
I like this...so far. Try not to go mary sue with Tori and she's getting pretty close. Just try to give her some actual character flaws and junk. Update soon
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Reviewed By: Reikka_Shinen [MediaMiner Member] On: July 06, 2004 21:28 CDT
Comment/Review:
is this a continuation or something. what did tori to that made hiei so aangry. well you better continue or you'll have to answer to my katana.
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Reviewed By: FeithCaios [MediaMiner Member] On: June 19, 2004 23:51 CDT
Comment/Review:
Nice choice for Tori's lover. I would've voted Hiei if it wasn't for the fact that I discovered this fic after you had already chosen him.
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