Reviewed By: lolololol On: June 21, 2004 16:52 CDT Comment/Review: really good story!
Reviewed By: Yume-chan On: June 09, 2004 23:10 CDT Comment/Review: The story's okay so far, the writing is a bit childish but still good and your sentence fluency needs soom improvement too. I hope to see more chapters in the near future. -Yume-chan
