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| "Friends Forever...Right?" Reviews/Comments [ 12 ] | Reviewed By: Setofanatic On: August 12, 2004 10:16 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hey, I would love to be in your story if it is not to late. (please ignore previos entry, I forgot some stuff!) Name: Adanya Anderson Age: 16 Height: 5'7" Hair: dark blonde/light brown and about midback lenght Eyes: I have sky blue eyes Clothes: I'm a guy girl, so anything baggy, and from hot topic, like black parachute pants, red and blue converse, and a navy blue shirt that says 'I beat the smart kids' dress and skirts are okay, But I prefer pants and shorts. sometimes, when I feel like dressing up, I'll wear tight light blue capris, and a bright red midriff. Hobbies: I love singing, roller skating, skateboarding, swimming, oh yeah i own a fourth of my family's company, Anderson inc. We publish books, my mom,mary, dad, robert, and my 21 year old brother, Andrew, or Andy own the other 3/4 of it. Personality: I am very random and pretty quite, If I don't know what's going on. i use my brain more than my common sense and after I have suger or caffine, i get very hyper. some call me a punk or goth form the type of clothes I wear, but my freinds know otherwise. Guys: You could pair me with Kaiba, Yami, Ryou, or light malik, i don't care, I love them all!! other: my parents got transfered to domino about a year ago, and my brother and i still live in america, but decide to join them, after you move back. okay, if you need anything email me? jassinger3373@hotmail.com thankies Setofanatic
| Reviewed By: Setofanatic On: August 12, 2004 10:04 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hey, I would love to be in your story if it is not to late. Name: Adanya Age: 15-17(whatever you chose) Height: 5'7" Hair: dark blonde/light brown and about midback lenght Clothes: I'm a guy girl, so anything baggy, and from hot topic, like black parachute pants, red and blue converse, and a navy blue shirt that says 'I beat the smart kids' dress and skirts are okay, But I prefer pants and shorts. Guys: You could pair me with Kaiba, Yami, Ryou, or light malik, i don't care, I love them all!! okay, if you need anything email me? jassinger3373@hotmail.com thankies Setofanatic
| Reviewed By: IYYYHPinay27 (Not logged in) On: August 11, 2004 17:35 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great start! Although many people make stories like these, yours is still pretty creative. Umm, here's my character if you want her! § Name: Tori Mikeru § Appearance: Waist length black hair usually out up in a high ponytail, brown eyes, 5'5, slim figure, tanned skin § Personality: Kind and friendly, she likes meeting new people. She can be shy sometimes. She is rebellious and does things that most people would think she couldn't because she's a girl, she looks too weak, etc. etc... Loves to be hyper and poke fun at people. But, she knows how and when to be serious. § Clothes: White sleeveless black shirt that laces up in the back with a red dragon in the front. Wears semi-tight black jeans. § Background: Lived in the United States until she was 7. Then she and her family moved to Cairo, Egypt until she was 14 and moved back to the U.S. While in high school, she studied hieroglyphics and the Egyptian culture. Is currently 16. § Paired with: Marik/Malik § Ah, I think that's about it! Feel free to e-mail me at kiteegurl@yahoo.com if you need anything else! Update fast and I'll see you soon!
| Title: sorry i forgot to add this
Reviewed By: Wing Angel On: July 28, 2004 13:28 CDT
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she can fly without wing and heal she controls the power of the wind, she free sprit sometime. Sora is people who love water, he strong sense of justice and he keeps his temper under control and he good sword fighting, he controls the power of water and he is Rika is boyfriend. Amy is elf who knows magic too, and she love speaks to animals and plants, she can hear 5 miles away and she is Alden's girlfriends and she free sprit sometime and she excellent with bow and arrow. Alden is a nighter, it's a person who can see at night as if it was day, they love the night, they like to wear black allot and they can blend in the dark, they use allot of dark magic, he goes through things and he controls darkness, he can scenes evil and he quiet person. Crystal is my sister who has the same powers as me but she can't use it right sometimes and she want be like me and she is very stubborn and I loves to play trick on people. Jade is Rika little sister she same age as my sister, she has same powers as Rika but she can't use it right sometimes and has the same personality as crystal. Eric is 11 year old wizard who can't use his power right sometimes and he inpatient and he sometime likes to destroy things and wining games. Wilson is transformer and genius he builds things and transform into animals and he has the same personality as Eric and the same things that Eric likes too.
| Title: sorry i forgot to add this
Reviewed By: Wing Angel On: July 28, 2004 13:27 CDT
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protecting the people i love, practicing my magic tricks and practicing my real magic and also help my sister with things. Practice using my weapons and material arts. I also like practicing my gymnastics and also practicing playing the harp or flute and horse back riding. I also enjoy cooking and plant flowers and playing Duel Monsters. Like Yami friends Joey, Tristan, Tea, Yugi, Mai, Duke, Bakura, Serenity, Mokuba and likes Seto when nice and like red rose, people when they are happy and likes making people happy. My favorite card is the Dark Magician Girl. Attack 2000/ defense 1700. Dislikes: I don't like people hurting someone, greedy, cheaters and evil people. Bullies and murderers and I don't like Seto when he is being selfish and Rex Raptor, Weevil Underwood, Bandit Keith, evil Marik and evil Bakura, Bones, evil Maximillion Pegasus. You don't have put some things in, if you don't want to and don't have pick me. Paired with Yami please. Childhood Best Friends: Rika is goddess/witch to who has the same powers as me but she controls light/thunder and she has the same personality as me but play the flute better than I can. Charlie is Berserker a man who can be very powerful when he is in rage and he controls the power of earth and he is Mariah's boyfriend and he to confient sometimes, Mariah is half wing healer ( a person who heals people and animals and a person with wings) and human, she can fly without wing and heal she controls the power of the wind, she free sprit som | Title: I am sorrythat I enter again again but I forgot to add some things
Reviewed By: Wing Angel On: July 28, 2004 13:23 CDT
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protecting the people i love, practicing my magic tricks and practicing my real magic and also help my sister with things. Practice using my weapons and material arts. I also like practicing my gymnastics and also practicing playing the harp or flute and horse back riding. I also enjoy cooking and plant flowers and playing Duel Monsters. Like Yami friends Joey, Tristan, Tea, Yugi, Mai, Duke, Bakura, Serenity, Mokuba and likes Seto when nice and like red rose, people when they are happy and likes making people happy. My favorite card is the Dark Magician Girl. Attack 2000/ defense 1700. Dislikes: I don't like people hurting someone, greedy, cheaters and evil people. Bullies and murderers and I don't like Seto when he is being selfish and Rex Raptor, Weevil Underwood, Bandit Keith, evil Marik and evil Bakura, Bones, evil Maximillion Pegasus. You don't have put some things in, if you don't want to and don't have pick me. Paired with Yami please. Childhood Best Friends: Rika is goddess/witch to who has the same powers as me but she controls light/thunder and she has the same personality as me but play the flute better than I can. Charlie is Berserker a man who can be very powerful when he is in rage and he controls the power of earth and he is Mariah's boyfriend and he to confient sometimes, Mariah is half wing healer ( a person who heals people and animals and a person with wings) and human, she can fly without wing and heal she controls the power of the wind, she free sprit som | Title: pick me please i beg of you!
Reviewed By: Wing Angel On: July 28, 2004 13:22 CDT
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Name: Crystal.Nickname: (optional)? Age: 16. Species: (human, demon, half and half etc.)Half goddess half witch half human. Human form:? Hair: (color, length, style); light purple, to your shoulder, in ponytail, bun or down. Eyes: light purple. Skin color: white skin. Clothes: (school, casual, fancy etc) I like to wear shorts, shirts, jackets, and pants. When it special occasions I wear dresses that is white or pure red, I also wear domino uniform and my work uniform. Personality: sometimes cheerful, loner, serious, cautious, kind, bright, tough, I have manners, loyal, stubborn, responsibly, generous, talented, patient and protect the people that I care about and i will hurt people who hurt my friends, I also believes in my friends, courageous, help other in need and self free and little sneaky and little bit shy and little bit of worrywart and cautious adventurous, and curious,. Other: I live my little sister, my parents got killed by murders. Weapons: (Applies for anything.) long sword and daggers, ninja stars, bow and arrows. Powers:(Applies for anything.) With healing power, transforming, fly, read minds (but use it for good) invisibility, jump very high and fire powers and can control other elements and speaks every kind of language. And I will protect my friends and my little sister from danger even if it cost me my on life and I promise my sister that I will protect her and my parents. I like reading books, making thing, hang out with my friends, ice skating, sing, pro | Title: pick me please i beg of you!
Reviewed By: Wing Angel On: July 28, 2004 13:22 CDT
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Name: Crystal.Nickname: (optional)? Age: 16. Species: (human, demon, half and half etc.)Half goddess half witch half human. Human form:? Hair: (color, length, style); light purple, to your shoulder, in ponytail, bun or down. Eyes: light purple. Skin color: white skin. Clothes: (school, casual, fancy etc) I like to wear shorts, shirts, jackets, and pants. When it special occasions I wear dresses that is white or pure red, I also wear domino uniform and my work uniform. Personality: sometimes cheerful, loner, serious, cautious, kind, bright, tough, I have manners, loyal, stubborn, responsibly, generous, talented, patient and protect the people that I care about and i will hurt people who hurt my friends, I also believes in my friends, courageous, help other in need and self free and little sneaky and little bit shy and little bit of worrywart and cautious adventurous, and curious,. Other: I live my little sister, my parents got killed by murders. Weapons: (Applies for anything.) long sword and daggers, ninja stars, bow and arrows. Powers:(Applies for anything.) With healing power, transforming, fly, read minds (but use it for good) invisibility, jump very high and fire powers and can control other elements and speaks every kind of language. And I will protect my friends and my little sister from danger even if it cost me my on life and I promise my sister that I will protect her and my parents. I like reading books, making thing, hang out with my friends, ice skating, sing, pro | Title: E-mail me if you need Anything! nenagh2414@yahoo.com
Reviewed By: Nenagh24 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 28, 2004 10:47 CDT
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WOW!! That was a really great set-up for a great story! May I be one of your freinds? (Puppy eyes) Please? Here is some info! ^^ Name: Nenagh Breen (Can you see my Irish ness? ^^) Personality: A little withdrawn untill you get her out of her shell, then she has a witty comment for anything you might through at her. Slightly crazy, meaning she will do spontanius things around people who know her well! ^^ Paired? I think Bakura is cool! Thanks for reading this bio that was put together hastily! ^^ I hope you pick me! Your story rocks! Keep it up! ^^ Ja!
| Reviewed By: dranzer109 On: July 28, 2004 10:28 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great idea. It's really intersesting. Can I be your friend? please? if so my name is Erin. I have long brown hair, light blue eyes, and pale skin. Age can be whatever is needed for the story. I can be kind of antisocial when i first meet a person or if I don't trust them but after you get to know I am very talkitive and friendly.
| Reviewed By: sailor moon [MediaMiner Member] On: July 28, 2004 10:04 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I find this thing to be rather instering and a rather good start, I cant wait until I see what happens next with this story. It will be instering how you interipate why all the changes occured in seto after that chess game. Though I feel its unfair how he was treated in his past life to leave him the way he is now. *smiles* names Kayla, if you wanna use me as your friend or what not,...also I like this qulity about me, that I like kept. I am blind, the reason I can type so well is I grew up in an age where learning to type was the most important thing to life and I use a screan reading program to one right this review, and two also to read the story. I can also chat on instent messanger programs as well and do just aout anthing that doesnt include graphics of any kind, though I have been known to play with ms paint just for fun to see what kind of picture I can create. but I would also like to say very well written and I wasnt the least bit board by this story even though this the very first chapter of it. good job btw and keep up the good writting. Very clear and very easy to understand.
| Title: um...?
Reviewed By: Tamra of Egypt [MediaMiner Member] On: June 06, 2004 23:30 CDT
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I like it...but it's not completed is it?
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