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Title: different
Reviewed By: Kichisama666 On: September 04, 2004 14:18 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This one rocks! HOLY SHHHHIIIIITTTTE! debbie chan you kick ass!
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Reviewed By: toasterwoman360 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 20, 2004 14:51 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
that's one hot lemon! one of the best i've ever read. nobodys ooc, kinda romantic but mostly intense hard core sex. that's really your first? amazing. i suck at writing lemons, this makes mine look like flighty schoolgirl flirting! you're like a lemon goddess. KEEP WRITING THEM!! thankies! ^_~
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Reviewed By: Khitoutsu [MediaMiner Member] On: August 18, 2004 13:51 PDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
whoa! that rocked! don't say all of the lemon is out of your system, i think u should write more!!
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Title: good god
Reviewed By: Saiya-jin44 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 14, 2004 22:29 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
Wow. Yes, wow. Amazing lemon. Amazing one shot. Bravo dude. Bravo. ^_^
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Reviewed By: Bardockgurl [MediaMiner Member] On: August 10, 2004 13:44 PDT
Comment/Review:
O.o I come here to give you a 'Congrats on being featured' review, and I see that I didn't leave one originally... *Slaps forehead* My apologies, I'm absent minded, and a p**s poor reviewer anyway, so it's not like you missed much... Excellent fic from an excellent writer, rarely has a fic been more worthy of being featured.. *Applauds*
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Reviewed By: Ladymadchan On: August 04, 2004 11:57 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
WOW!
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Reviewed By: The Oujis Mate [MediaMiner Member] On: August 01, 2004 17:50 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow...and that's all I have to say about that.
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Reviewed By: Kethry [MediaMiner Member] On: June 24, 2004 17:33 PDT
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I was truly impressed! I always flinch when I see a B/V done becouse it almost always turns out with Vegeta acting very out of charater, but you didn't do that to him and I say thank you. I hope that I will be able to keep that sprite as I work on my Vegeta story. Thank you for writting this.
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Reviewed By: Sulawesi [MediaMiner Member] On: June 22, 2004 09:45 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
You are an amazeing lemon writer!!! O________o wow, It protrayed a lot of emotations that most lemons dont. You also went into great detale not only with the way their bodies where 'working' but also how their minds where opporateing at the same time. Keep it up!!! YOUR GOOD AT THIS -Jen
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Reviewed By: swissmiss On: June 20, 2004 20:51 PDT
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i personally hope the whole "lemon thing" is NEVER out of your system!
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Reviewed By: pixelgoddess [MediaMiner Member] On: June 19, 2004 09:56 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Sure I read sappy het - just the good ones though. So yours counts. *g* I really like how comfortable and loving your BV are. Bulma accepts him for what he is, while still trying to teach him, not change him. Your lemons are sweet - and make me jealous - why can't I find someone who loves me like that? (It sounds like you are writing from experience - lucky you.) Nice ending with Bulma realizing what is different about Vegeta. Hope to see more of your work soon.
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Reviewed By: Evil Saint (not signed in) On: June 16, 2004 10:41 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Geez I can't believe I didn't review this after reading it for the first time >_< I seriously thought I did, but I guess my brains are totally fried after the three week Red Bull binge, commonly known as college finals @_@ This truly is one of the best B/V stories I've read in the fourteen odd months that I've been part of the fandom! Also, thanks for reviewing AR. I'm kind of honoured that someone with your talent would give the time of day my little fic (blushes). I know I get long winded at some parts and I am trying to improve on that. The thing is I really want the readers to see the scene the way I do in my head and then I get a carried away with the descriptions (blushes again). I really appreciate your input and I'll make sure to check out your other stories. You are a great writer and I'm so glad I came across your stuff ^_^ Keep writing! Hugs ES ^_~
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Reviewed By: Elenek [MediaMiner Member] On: June 16, 2004 10:37 PDT
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You review a lot of the same stories I do so I decided to check out yours. I'm very glad I did. These are fantastic. -El-
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Reviewed By: Mystical Mayhem On: June 14, 2004 01:52 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OK this isn't at all what I expected. I was a little apprehensive of what I might find when I first started reading, but I was very pleasantly surprised ^_^ This is an excellent piece of writing! I really do hope it isn't the only lemon you plan on writing, because you're really good at it. I'd really like to see some more of this kind of stuff from you - being the hentai that I am O.o
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Reviewed By: Phantomscribe72-Carla On: June 13, 2004 17:19 PDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Remind me never to dare you to do anything... Hot lemon... It's hard to believe this is your first!
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