| "The Rest of the Story" Reviews/Comments [ 4 ] |
Reviewed By: Nokomarie the Snake On: June 08, 2005 01:51 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
That builds quite a mental image there. I keep thinking the flowers would be pink with yellow centers.
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Reviewed By: chaos_kyes_fallen_angel(not sighned in ) On: May 22, 2005 03:14 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
wow! ^_^ im glad i added you. i loved this story.. it was so valuable, philosophically, to me. I loved sesshoumaru's story and his lesson... i also like the ending, it was really cute and humorous. XD ^_^
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Reviewed By: Pied Piper [MediaMiner Member] On: July 27, 2004 22:41 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow, that was so cute. It was well written and had a good plot: you're good at one-shots. Great job.
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Reviewed By: Ryunosuke-sama [MediaMiner Member] On: June 12, 2004 01:20 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This has got to be one of the best one-shots I have ever read. Mabye you could do another from Sesshoumaru's point of view. That would be great.
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