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| "Snowed In" Reviews/Comments [ 4 ] | Title: i hav gr8 news!
Reviewed By: just sum1 On: June 25, 2005 18:47 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
ok i hav put da ratings as i like but i want u to hear a quote from da book im workin on DRAGON STONE. Is bout gal Meg who wants adventure, so gets guardian thunda dragon. tell me wat ya fink: Meg had a million stitches in her side as she ran through the streets of the dark town. She turned into an alley, thinking she had lost...him.He killed her best friend, and now he was back for Meg. Suddenly, she heard a sinister cackle. He was right behind her. "Why?" was all that came from her lips. He just laughed a thrust his jewltudded, sword to her head. She rose her hand, dropping the stone to the floor. Smoke rose around her, and thunder clouds hide the blue skie. Through the smoke, she saw the glint of the knife point right in her face, before she heard a roar. It sounded like thunder and,a...a...dragon. @@@ Huge cliffie huh. Soz I didn't say much bout this fickie, but it wuz honestly gr8. Scary, but gr8. I hope u liked the quote, look out for the books in year or 3. Bye!
| Title: Oops...ratings!
Reviewed By: phreakyevil [MediaMiner Member] On: June 23, 2004 20:28 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
As for your ratings, 10's all the way! Also, I'll take a go at who the murderer is. I think it's...Anzu! If Anzu killed Yami, then Yugi wouldn't have Yami anymore and therefore would be able to hook up with Tea. She loved him so much, she's murder to win him over! Baaaad Tea.
| Title: HA! ^-^
Reviewed By: phreakyevil [MediaMiner Member] On: June 23, 2004 20:25 CDT
Comment/Review:
I LOVED IT!! I was laughing the whole time...except the end. But It was really interesting! I liked it much! You're a really great writer! ^-^ How did he die?! How HOW HOW?!?! Please update soon!
| Title: I'm not a stocker
Reviewed By: Shihaisha [MediaMiner Member] On: June 22, 2004 19:06 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
Ok no I am not stocking you, I just enjoyed your other stuff so much that I decided I would sample some of your other work. If I am freakin you out I will stop. Just let me know. Well the obvious choice would be Kaiba since he isn't there, but that is out. The least obvious would be Yugi or maybe Serenity. Now wouldn't that be a littel twist. Ah well I will not give you a final vote until I have read some more. So you may post both Yugi and Serenity. If it so pleases you. Kay I'm done. Ja! Shi
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