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"The Drama's Of A Teenage Life" Reviews/Comments [ 31 ]
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 Reviewed By: nan_de_mo_chibi_otoko [MediaMiner Member]  On: April 13, 2011 17:13 EDT
Comment/Review:
So I had to come back and re-read one of my all time favorite fictions ;) Seriously you did a great job with this story. :)
 Title: loving it
Reviewed By: preciousjade [MediaMiner Member]  On: March 30, 2011 19:12 EDT
Comment/Review:
I'm loving this fic so far. I'm glad I found it. U probably don't read these reviews anymore, but I want u to know how much I like this story.
 Reviewed By: Aiyana [MediaMiner Member]  On: April 10, 2005 10:24 EDT
Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
I really enjoyed it, your fanfic was very original and entertaining!
 Reviewed By: Sumara [MediaMiner Member]  On: October 08, 2004 07:16 EDT
Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
Ehhh...YOOUR FIC IS AWSOME....dunno what to say but i'm obsessed ;) haha not really dont worry. V. v. cool
 Reviewed By: rose of vegeta  On: September 13, 2004 11:34 EDT
Comment/Review:
*sniffles* I loved it!! You were a little evil with the whole 'what the hell is vegeta doing' but this was great. So is there a sequel in the process *hint hint..write one* just kidding. it's up to you what you're gonna do anyway. Cheers!
 Reviewed By: nan de mo chibi otoko  On: September 10, 2004 18:56 EDT
Comment/Review:
terrific!!!!! im so in love with ur writing, congradulations on getting fave fic of the year!!!! from me to you i present you with this un official award!!!! love, nan de mo chibi otoko
 Reviewed By: dbz fan jess  On: August 30, 2004 16:22 EDT
Comment/Review:
I know, I was out of town for almost two weeks... and no internet... I was so sad. I really can't wait to see where you are going with this. Loved it though... can't wait for the next update
 Reviewed By: nan de mo chibi otoko  On: August 30, 2004 12:08 EDT
Comment/Review:
the bastard!!! why is he doing this?!?!?!?! it's not fair poor b-chan!!!
 Reviewed By: nan de mo chibi otoko  On: August 21, 2004 16:21 EDT
Comment/Review:
how cute, now what was going on with vegeta in the last chapy hmmm,?
 Reviewed By: Sumz (Sumara but i can't sign in) [MediaMiner Member]  On: August 19, 2004 05:51 EDT
Comment/Review:
ohhh you absolutly cannot make Vegeta love anyone but Bulma....I'll cry if he does...really i will....*sniff* anyway its great and PLEASE write more again....this fics addictive....ive read it two nites strate since i realised you updated it! ohhh anyway...i talk to much....great fic...still...\m/(^.^)\m/
 Reviewed By: Angel Eyes  On: August 15, 2004 11:37 EDT
Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
Dude wtf r u doin! Kick the story in 2 high gear and get Bulma bak wiv Vegeta! Tina has 2 be out of the scene here she dont belong. Write the next chapter quickly.
 Title: tears
Reviewed By: nan de mo chibi otoko  On: August 14, 2004 19:44 EDT
Comment/Review:
what the hell is vegeta doing?!?!?! i dont know where your going with this but wtf happened?
 Title: have a half-baked idea
Reviewed By: nan de mo chibi otoko (not signed in)  On: August 10, 2004 04:29 EDT
Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
well if its the wonderful half-baked ideas you crave then be glad to lend a helping hand. The sachiyo's should move to cali and try to salvage a relationship with b-chan because it's not fair to move her from her comfort zone, nor is it fair to keep her from her parents so theren lyes the choice, either they move to cali or they forget about bulma.
 Reviewed By: nan_de_mo_chibi_otoko [MediaMiner Member]  On: August 08, 2004 04:30 EDT
Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
shit i'm crying. bulma will be ok right? poor vegeta, stupid tomoyuki. if it weren't for vegeta i would have killed him. now i'm all depresed. tell vegeta she will live, i think she is feeding off his streangth so he should stay strong.
 Reviewed By: Candy the Duck [MediaMiner Member]  On: July 30, 2004 14:18 EDT
Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
great chapter! good lemon!....i can't think of any thing else to say...oh ya! I think Trunks should get back with veggies sister(can't rememmer how to spell it)
 Title: oh yea
Reviewed By: nan_de_mo_chibi_otoko [MediaMiner Member]  On: July 27, 2004 17:37 EDT
Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
What!!!! The jelous X what is the psyco gonna do hmmmm? Can trunks beat the crap out of him pleaaseee? big puppy dog eyes.
 Reviewed By: your fav reviewer  On: July 23, 2004 02:08 EDT
Comment/Review:
ha ha... like you won't be able to figure out who this is... I will eventually update my story... as soon as I'm done having classes pile tests on me... ahhhhhh.... you will not find who the mysterious man is yet... ok, so now for your review... wonderful chappy... bulmy and veggie are so cute... now what is it with the mysterious man you've but into your story... ok and no my vote... I really am not into lemons so I mean you can assume what they do... but if you want make it a hint many more ppl will probably be happy... I hope you update soon... and I'll leave you another review... and hopefully if I get around to it I will update mine but tests first then update and hopefully two more updates in the near future... hey I think this is the longest review I've left on mm ever... I love their new counter that was I know exactly how long I've made it... well great stuff loved it and the bv moments... well I'll be waiting and working on my own stuff.... so adieu for now... the ever infamous DBZ-Fan-Jess
 Title: To be A or to be B that is the question
Reviewed By: nan_de_mo_chibi_otoko [MediaMiner Member]  On: July 23, 2004 00:13 EDT
Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
Bomb chapter i love love love this. and whats this vegeta has a male stalker!!!! omg! save vegie chan from the evil. Trunks is like so going to be one of my new idols
 Title: I wanna own the ocupant of the bench
Reviewed By: nan_de_mo_chibi_otoko [MediaMiner Member]  On: July 12, 2004 23:00 EDT
Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
That redhead slut better have backed off my.... i mean bulma's veggie-chan.
 Reviewed By: dbz fan jess  On: July 10, 2004 02:10 EDT
Comment/Review:
aww veggie and bulmy...she kissed him awww.... well I liked it... its a new twist and I'm ready for all the fun surprises... well loved it, loved it... aww what can happen btwn bulma and veggie while this adventure goes on... well can't wait for more...
 Title: oh goody
Reviewed By: nan_de_mo_chibi_otoko [MediaMiner Member]  On: July 09, 2004 22:30 EDT
Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
omg is she going to actualy meet her birth parents. wow its too good to be true. and vegeta is going to see her throught he hard times of accepting the briefs are'nt the real family. But she loves trunks so much. poor bulma.. p.s my name means what-ever little man nan de mo chibi otoko
 Reviewed By: Sumara  On: July 07, 2004 20:57 EDT
Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
please PLEASE wirte more of this!!!! *begs* i'm obsessed and it's great.....just the sorta fanfic i luv reading.....more...neeed...more... =)=)=)=)
 Reviewed By: nan_de_mo_chibi_otoko [MediaMiner Member]  On: July 06, 2004 14:48 EDT
Comment/Review:
nooooooo!!!!! Cliff hangar!!!! Nooooooo!!!!! im rocking back and forth in my chair waiting for an update is bulma adopted? is she a chemicaly enginered robot? Is she betrothed to vegeta? Did dr. Briefs kinfnap Her? oh god im spazing. oh by the way love the story.
 Reviewed By: Little_Angel [MediaMiner Member]  On: July 06, 2004 10:46 EDT
Comment/Review:
this story aint bad. theres a few things that made me laugh and i totally feel for bulma and her big family. im the younges of seven so how do you think i feel?
 Title: PLEASE UPDATE!!!!!!!`
Reviewed By: guerro  On: June 28, 2004 21:51 EDT
Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
Please update it i really want to know what happens next
 Title: go veggie kick the morons ass
Reviewed By: DBZ MANIAC  On: June 26, 2004 06:51 EDT
Comment/Review:
some one needs 2 stick a pen up zarbon's arse and twist it round bulma and veggie 4ev@ ^_^ still got my attention and now im not gonna leave the comp until u have updated *_* aaaa the computer is burning my eyes "must stay on" passes out momentarily ha ha ha im still here lustin after vegeto lol update pls!!!
 Reviewed By: dbz-fan jess  On: June 23, 2004 19:43 EDT
Comment/Review:
great chapty... I can't wait for your next update... that was a wonderful double chapter you added for us... I'm completely entertained with this new count down thing that mediaminer has... I can't wait for the next update for any of your stories.... they are all wonderful... hee hee... I'm glad bulmy doesn't want zarbon... now she and veggie need to hook up for the homecoming... and yay I can't wait for some zarbon abuse in the next chappie... maybe a b/v moment coming up soon.
 Title: none
Reviewed By: guerro  On: June 22, 2004 09:43 EDT
Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
really like it keepit coming k
 Title: Comin on smoothly
Reviewed By: DBZ MANIAC  On: June 21, 2004 03:46 EDT
Comment/Review:
so far im likein it and i tell u im like the simon cowell of DBZ lol so come on give us a show coz i wanna c some ACTION!!!!! kudos on zarbon i hope vegeta kicks jis freeza kissin ass!!!!! and hopefully me and vegeta or goku can come 2 my place but my secret love is vegeto give me him any day
 Reviewed By: Phsycobratt [MediaMiner Member]  On: June 19, 2004 01:50 EDT
Comment/Review:
Funny, funny, I like. Please go on.
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