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Title: NOOOOOOOOOO!
Reviewed By: Assassin of the Shadows [MediaMiner Member] On: September 21, 2008 19:50 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
:sobs: It's not fair! It's been so long since you wrote this chapter you probably don't care for it anymore- but I really love this story!! It's brightened my world for the past two days; getting me to laugh again. I miss my nice and nephew something terrible now >.<
Please update this story the enjoyment factor is just too great. I love stories like this but sadly no author ever seems to finish them. It must be hard to though sometimes, ne?
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Reviewed By: seamaidian On: July 17, 2005 18:10 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I just love this story!! I am new to Weiss and I am reading thru the stories and this is my favorite without a doubt. I hope you plan to write more on this story.
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Reviewed By: DireAngel [MediaMiner Member] On: April 22, 2005 01:32 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I am in love this story and can't wait for the next installment.....Which better be sometme soon because I am impatient and will bug you until the next one is up!
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Reviewed By: SapphireGems On: January 28, 2005 00:43 CST
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lol!!! this is a fantastic fic!!! what happens to the two teams after Ken and Omi change back??? update more soon!
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Reviewed By: jgal [MediaMiner Member] On: November 20, 2004 21:49 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
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it's really interesting... i loved it.
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Title: formerly Macha
Reviewed By: Tinkerhell On: November 18, 2004 17:03 CST
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Yay you updated. and it was another adorable chapter. I love your farfie in this fic. and Nagi statement about charming honey from bees..just greatplease update soon!!!
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Reviewed By: babymar-mar On: November 14, 2004 14:13 CST
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muahhaa thats sooo funny! so what color are you dying yohjis hair?? red? black? they are so evil to make him carry womens shopping bags!
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Reviewed By: EV On: November 14, 2004 00:24 CST
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Woohoo!! An update!! YAY!! GREEAAATTT Chapter! Update soon!
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Title: ^___^
Reviewed By: AubreyW On: November 05, 2004 07:59 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Ok, Im not logged on cause im on the computer at my school, but this chapter was AWESOME.I love Farfarello in this fic.He's so protective...Maybe he and Ken will get together when he changes back, BWAHAHAHAHAH Ahem..update soon please;-;
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Reviewed By: Beysie [MediaMiner Member] On: November 04, 2004 16:19 CST
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*chuckling nearly out of control*... I'm trying to write this while laughing... you have no idea on the errors I've had to go back and fix! This chappie was excellent! I'm so glad you had this out so quickly... Poor Yoji, stuck with all those menial jobs, shopping with women, AND a makeover! ROFLMAO I can't wait for that part! This is gonna be sooooooo good... *very big evil grin* Yoji is so fun to torture, he's just so vain sometimes... well, ok nearly all the time. Now, if we could get Schuldig stuck in a punishment like that? Oh, that would be a blast too! food for thought for you anyway. Please update again soon, this was fantastic and I can't wait to see what's next!
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Reviewed By: Miko no Tears and Aya not logged in On: November 04, 2004 16:03 CST
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Shame on me, i dont think i have ever reviewed this one! bad, bad me. ok here goes, this is entirely too funny for words! i can just see those two getting into all sorts of trouble. i love the way the adults are with them, totally changing some of their attitudes in a believable way, fantastic! and wow, that was harsh punishment for Yohji! i loved it! cant wait for the next chapter!
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Reviewed By: RyiaJenRowen On: November 03, 2004 22:05 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Chaosdreamer-sama!!! WHY! Why have you not updated in so long?! I need more fanfic before I go into a state of withdrawals... And you don't want your number 1 fangirl fainting and going into withdrawals now do you?? *chibi eyes* PLEASE UPDATE SOON!! Or else I will be forced to take drastic measures and attack you with my "Rabid Pink Plot Bunnies of DOOM!!!" And they will start multiplying eating all your food, and sleeping in your bed. They will never leave until you update. So please update soon, I really need your fanfic and don't want to have to sic the bunnies on you.
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Reviewed By: Beysie [MediaMiner Member] On: November 01, 2004 00:57 CST
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Oh, you have to update this fic! This is simply too good to leave alone... you're in my fav author's list, I need to see an update from you soon. I beg you! I love how these chibi's have made all the assasins work together... ah, the innocence of children! You've portrayed the chibi's quite well... I'm impressed! How they're mischevious, how they are vamped up on sugar, how they make a mess... compared to my kids, they're quite accurate! Reminds me of my boys... at least Ken and Omi haven't begun fighting like siblings yet... Again, I beg you to update this soon please, I love it!
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Title: ^_^
Reviewed By: Lisullenlye [MediaMiner Member] On: October 24, 2004 03:04 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Another awesomnely written fic^^ I love Schuldig and Farfarello in this fic.^___^I can understand too why its not on affO.o;So Im glad I tracked down this account@_@; Hope you update this fic soon too^^
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Reviewed By: Ev On: October 17, 2004 00:52 CDT
Comment/Review:
UPDATE!!! Please.
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Title: Your Starting To Get On My Nerves About Not Updating!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Reviewed By: Yaoi Sex Goddess [MediaMiner Member] On: October 08, 2004 10:30 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Okay lets get one thing straight just because I gave you Striker doesn't save you from my meaner Hounds Of Hell, Striker was a gift to show how pleased I was that you had updated. But new owner or not I am still his Goddess his Creater and he will obey me, Mortal, now I don't want to get mean and nasty so if you go ahead and update I won't, if you don't update I will be forced to be very mean and nasty and you will face my wrath without mercy. I'm not keen on giving mercy to Mortals Choas, now update and I may make up one of my own little stories just for you, ya know the sick perverted ones I keep in a notebook under my bed. Well Bye.
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Title: Hey
Reviewed By: Angel_Slayer [MediaMiner Member] On: October 08, 2004 09:50 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I for one am very pleased with this story update or I'll have to take grave, perverted measures. Well Ja Ne
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Reviewed By: FafarellosAya [MediaMiner Member] On: September 19, 2004 03:02 CDT
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you're as bad as me in not updating a good Weiss Chibi fic; i'll make you a deal, you update yours and i'll attempt to update mine! common keep going! this is funny and i wanna know what happens when Ken and Omi grow up again!
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Reviewed By: Evey On: September 14, 2004 19:39 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
That was great! I haven't checked on this story in a while, but I'm glad I did now cause you finally updated!! YAY!! lol Anyway, wonderful new chapter of course! Keep up the good work and update again soon!! I love this fic!! Later! ^.^
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Reviewed By: Macha On: September 14, 2004 15:54 CDT
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UPDATE....update update update update please please please(gives irresistable puppy dog eyes)pretty please with sugar on top update soon!!!!! your killin me here!!!!!
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Reviewed By: Macha On: August 29, 2004 16:21 CDT
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Yay you finnally updated!!!!! I love this story so much. Please don't make every wait so long for another chappy (Makes irresistably cute puppy eyes)Please please please please please!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: cr4wf0rdsan [MediaMiner Member] On: August 25, 2004 15:51 CDT
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keep going with this, jman. its really cute so far!! lets have some bradken action!! XD
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Title: Hi
Reviewed By: Yaoi Sex Goddess [MediaMiner Member] On: August 24, 2004 02:57 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Thank You, I for one enjoyed that chapter, it makes me happy to see you updated. There for, I won't sick my Perverted Hounds Of Hell, on you in fact, I'm feeling so pleasent that I think, I think this glowing review will be not even be enough. There for I'm giving you one of my Perverted Hounds Of Hell, *4 foot tall, black wolf saunters up to Yaoi, training his Crimson eyes on his new owner* His name is Striker, short for DeathStrike. He's a good Hell Hound, very perverted in his own right, (Just don't get him near any chains okay, cause that's his favorite game to play with his prey) Well Loved the chapter, Bye
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Title: UPDATE WOMAN!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Reviewed By: Yaoi Sex Goddess [MediaMiner Member] On: August 22, 2004 00:45 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Now I know you might not like what I have to say, but keep in mind I have been waiting quite awhile for you to update this story so here goes. UPDATE SOON OR I'LL SICK MY PERVERTED HOUNDS OF HELL ON YOU, YOU NONE UPDATER, WHAT YOUR DOING TO THOSE OF US WHO HAVE READ YOUR STORY IS SICK AND WRONG AND I FOR ONE WILL NOT STAND FOR IT, I'M GONNA BADGER YOU UNTIL YOU UPDATE DO I MAKE MYSELF CLEAR. Okay, Great story, Bye. ^____^!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: Weiss Kittyn On: July 26, 2004 18:36 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
WOW. i love this fanfic~! its so CUTE~! i really hope you get the next chapter up quickly, i would love to find out what happens when ken and omi turn back to adults and find themselves in the care of Schwarz....also, i am curious to know what Weiss thinks of the disappearance of their two youngest members... ^ - ^ all in all, an excellent fanfic...i really hope to see more from it soon. you WILL have more soon, right? *makes big, watery, puppy dog eyes at the author* please? pretty please?
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Reviewed By: Rune Essence [MediaMiner Member] On: July 26, 2004 01:27 CDT
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what a kawaii story! i love it! keep up the good work and don't forget to update ^_~
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Reviewed By: Py On: July 09, 2004 15:35 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This had me giggling for ages. I like the slide bit the best,poor Schuschu *snickers*. Looking forward to more (hint hint) ^__^ Luv ya!
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Reviewed By: Macha On: July 02, 2004 21:15 CDT
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This story is so freakin cute you have to update come on!!!!!! Please!!!!
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Reviewed By: allis [MediaMiner Member] On: June 22, 2004 03:59 CDT
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hey there ^.^ that's bad with ff.net *hugs you* they are evil x.x we~ell...I love that story ^___^ It's very funny! When the two grew up again, will there be a pairing? XD (bad grammar...sorry ^.^;) hope you'll update soon
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Reviewed By: Macha On: June 20, 2004 20:24 CDT
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I love your story its sooooo cute please update soon !!!!!!!!!!!!!
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