Reviewed By: luvweaver On: August 22, 2002 10:12 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 5 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 1 of 10
Overall Rating: 5 of 10 Comment/Review:
Okay. First of all... how could Lime get pregnant? She's a marionette please!
Depressing. Now after analizing your other fics, i thing something's really weird going on in your head.
Also, the paragraphs... it's all fuzzy, it costs a lot to read those extralong paragraphs.
Details - you miss a lot of details, that's what fics are made for.
Overall rating: 5/10 |
