| "Real Life Applications of The Bunny Hop" Reviews/Comments [ 11 ] |
Reviewed By: Feith On: July 02, 2004 21:10 CDT
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*sigh* You got a part in the main story. That should be enough, SSHM. Additionally, I'm not going to arugue with you on the hotness factor.
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Title: Kelsey
Reviewed By: Prototototototototototo On: July 02, 2004 20:25 CDT
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...You made me into a WOLF...with a dog body. ...Nice. I wasn't in the short break! I could've had many good arguments to why Yoko is betterer than Kurama. He's more masculine, and suave, his voice is far less annoying, and it doesn't have that little British tang. Everybody knows that white-silverish hair is way cooler than pinkie hair!!
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Reviewed By: FeithCaios [MediaMiner Member] On: July 02, 2004 08:57 CDT
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Well, you are allowed to complain now. I thought about it for awhile then I decided that this chappie sux. Oh, well, I'll try to improve. Thank you all unknown readers who have read this story. It makes me happy that I'm entertaining my fans. *cricket chirp* Well, at least I have crickets for my fans. *crickets stop chirping* Stupid crickets. *throws shoe at them*
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Reviewed By: CandyKrazy [MediaMiner Member] On: July 02, 2004 04:10 CDT
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XD!!!! Well... This made my day, haha Hiei and Kurama doing the bunny hop....
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Reviewed By: SeaMyth [MediaMiner Member] On: July 02, 2004 03:58 CDT
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It is a horrid song! Another good chappies I must say! You could improve by having more pointless chapters! they are funny.
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Reviewed By: FeithCaios [MediaMiner Member] On: June 29, 2004 09:47 CDT
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Thankies, Minerva. That one definitley counts as a hug from a reader. YOu can come up with compliments that would make any author that doesn't know you personally blush.
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Reviewed By: Minerva [MediaMiner Member] On: June 28, 2004 23:38 CDT
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Your story is truly amusing. Though I have to be honest. I usually have an extreme dislike of original characters that play a major part in fanfictions. BUT your story is amusing and has moments where you need to stop and think. You most likly were making this out to be entertaining(Which it is),but there parts of your story that deals with real life. Which, I will praise you for makes you story truly original.
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Reviewed By: Feith On: June 28, 2004 22:58 CDT
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No, you can't talk SeaMyth 'cuz you're on the computer. Sorry, that one was bad I know it, but I couldn't help it. Thank you for the constructive criticism. I personally think that RLAOTBH sux compared to the writing style of the prologue of Shapeshiftign Pride. Now that's art rather than words on paper.
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Reviewed By: SeaMyth [MediaMiner Member] On: June 28, 2004 22:20 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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I have to say it is about time I reviewed isn't it? It did take me long enough. I enjoyed it. It was amusing (Hilarious in other words)But I think every writer can improve in writing style. Grammar can improve also but I can't talk.
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Reviewed By: Fe On: June 18, 2004 15:20 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
silliness? What's arong with that?
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Title: juliajdjusss
Reviewed By: WhatsShakinBacon [MediaMiner Member] On: June 18, 2004 13:01 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
hey, it's good so far... slightly confusing, but your sriting style is real nice!
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