| "A mended Heart" Reviews/Comments [ 26 ] |
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Title: sorry guys
Reviewed By: meimei (#!) On: July 11, 2004 18:05 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
okay............i think it should be a romantic chapter. i'm thinking that they should become a couple in this chap. i also think that at least in one chapter the should become one, if you know what i mean, lol. i juss think that the story should be romantic. GOOD LUCK!
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Reviewed By: DesendeantsRyouDarkness [MediaMiner Member] On: June 25, 2004 16:47 CDT
Comment/Review:
Oh My God! this was sooooooo funny! glad you updated! wow,I loved it, Loved it, Loved it! wow the ending was cool Never.....play with fire, wow she sounded like an X-men there! lol anyway hope you contuine, and if you dont a knife goes through your heart! Well Sayonara and Arigato!
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Title: Cahpter 3
Reviewed By: La Che` On: June 25, 2004 14:20 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
That was good.It seems like a true story comming to life, you have a true gift in writing. Oh n thanx for the spelling thing.
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Reviewed By: meimei (duh) On: June 25, 2004 13:53 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
that was a really good story.
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Reviewed By: NAi nAi On: June 25, 2004 13:35 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This was a funny one especially when she slapped him,,, he deserved it and i would have done the same thing :-P,,, O and when she gave him the glare and said never play with fire,,, that was surprising cuz i thought she was going to say sorry but o well he got what he got and what he got he deserved,,, lol :-D
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Reviewed By: NAi nAi On: June 25, 2004 13:12 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
The writing was unique,,, something i probably wouldnt be able to write,,, Its a good story and the author has a good writing talent,,,its interesting to see what the overwelmed boy is going to do next and if the girl is going to except and juss smile,,, :-D,,,
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Reviewed By: setofanatic On: June 25, 2004 09:48 CDT
Comment/Review:
More please!!!
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Reviewed By: setofanatic On: June 24, 2004 18:41 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
you..have...to....add...more...NOW!!!! Please ^____^ thankies -YnR
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Title: Unbelieveable
Reviewed By: La Che` On: June 23, 2004 13:30 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
awwwwwwwwwwwww thats so nice, itz wonderful. I can't believe the intense reailty that it brings to me. One thing....u should slow down when writing it b/c there were a few misspelled words that i know you would've never gotten wrong in reality. NOne the less it is wonderful, and u r a true writer.
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Title: traim ride 2
Reviewed By: meimei On: June 23, 2004 12:52 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
O wow, it is amazing how this story is starting off with a good start! GIRL U ARE THE BEST!!!!
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Reviewed By: DesendeantsRyouDarkness [MediaMiner Member] On: June 22, 2004 22:30 CDT
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Love this chapter! just the fact that you put Tea in the stry is bothering me! but i say this! if Tea ever kisses Ryou oh hell Im comin to your house and of hell your dying! good story though. Arigato for the chapter!
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Reviewed By: GemJewel [MediaMiner Member] On: June 20, 2004 13:22 CDT
Comment/Review:
fun.
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Reviewed By: DesendeantsRyouDarkness [MediaMiner Member] On: June 19, 2004 19:40 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This story is marvlous! I love it, I love it, I love it, I love it! continue please! and if you dont then we would just have to get blood up in this peace now wount we!!!! but in all respect please coninue! Arigato!
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Title: very romantic
Reviewed By: La Che` On: June 19, 2004 16:48 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Yo hershey that was tight. I mean usually these's stories bore me to death...but damn that one was better than ur last one.I'm lookin foward to the other chapters. Plz keep writin no matter what cuz that was just... breath taking.
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Title: out for sota(chap 1)
Reviewed By: meimei On: June 19, 2004 10:34 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
o wow, kikyo101...........you really out did yourself this time. I defenitly think that you are getting better with your stories. YOU GO GIRL!
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