| "A mended Heart" Reviews/Comments [ 26 ] |
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Title: Your itoko
Reviewed By: True Dreamer On: November 29, 2004 10:39 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OH MY GOSH!! You have to finish this story...I demand it! It's so deep and funny. I love it!! Right when I started reading the story I got sucked in, and I wasn't able to stop reading until I finished reading all of the chapters. Still, you were almost too cruel stopping at a juicy chapter..*cry*..I was gettin' all fired up and everything! There where a couple of spelling errors, but who cares!! The story grabbed me and left me begging for more and that's what matters!! More I tell you! Gimme more!!!!!
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Reviewed By: La Che` On: November 16, 2004 20:02 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
AAAAAAAWWWWWWWWWWWW....OMG Yugi is goin insane, joey's a lil stupid b!tch, and we gettin to some sweet lovin...ah i love it!!!! I'm goin crazy yo...i'm cheezin like wat!!! lol ayo chivvy that was tight...nice job yo....ehem sry lost ma uhhhhhhhh....i lost somthin just then idk wat it was but damn chick, yeah wow, i'm in aww. YEAH BUDDY..
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Reviewed By: babii so slow On: November 07, 2004 13:20 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
your stories are getting better and better. As a friend that knows you well, as you mature so does your stories!! (ha everything i said makes me sound smart) anyways much love, n keep writing
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Title: THANK YOU!!!
Reviewed By: Kaiba'sgurl On: November 07, 2004 11:02 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
OMG!!!! Thank you for making my baby be in there. I loved this chapter.. Can't wait for the next!!
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Reviewed By: DesendeantsRyouDarkness [MediaMiner Member] On: November 07, 2004 09:43 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
My goodness So good and touching, you know I loved it sooo much OMG the thing with the clock, it's so sweet Awwwwwww I love this chapter so much ok update when you get the chance ^_^ Lovie Lovies Sayonara....
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Title: wow
Reviewed By: La Che` On: October 17, 2004 15:11 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 7 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow..thats all i can say is wow. Man everythin was all good but den u had to go n kill the grandfather.....tisk tisk tisk....but it waz iight. I mean ya past chapters was betta, but u kno its all good....
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Reviewed By: DesendeantsRyouDarkness [MediaMiner Member] On: September 26, 2004 08:51 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Yo Hartless what up?, you know this story was HOT all the way, I cant believe you killed Grandpa (NOT LIKE THAT) ^_^ anywayz update soon dont take 2-3 monts to update iight....and if you do, I'll make sure that you will end up like that body on CSI ( you know the one i was showing you on saturday) ok Lovie Lovies ^_^ Sayonara.....
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Reviewed By: meimei(michelle) On: September 25, 2004 13:17 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
omg that is so sad sista girl. how u think of stuff like this i don't kno. u r truly talented. ok n after u read this u better take ur breathin test, n u kno wat i'm talkin about, lol.
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Reviewed By: DesendeantsRyouDarkness [MediaMiner Member] On: July 13, 2004 14:48 CDT
Comment/Review:
1) Hell Yea I am... 2)The hell yea you should because if you know I would hve to sice your head right off, and then for the first of your body parts??? I dont know yet, but I know that I would have to cut them up!... 3)Any suggestions? No what you have there is great! If I had any problems then I would tell yu but I dont so continue 4)Not a damn clue..but thanks for asking...5) Hell No... 6)Anything??? Gomen Nassai cant help you there... Vote) um....Well from my corner, I think you should know, But In this fic??? I dont know Gomen Nassai again....^_^
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Reviewed By: sorceress_sarrkh [MediaMiner Member] On: July 11, 2004 22:25 CDT
Comment/Review:
) Very much so. 2) Definitely 3) Unfotunately nothing beyond simply continuing. It's a very interesting story involving a character often ignored. What would be nice to know is why his interest in her has him sprung out of his shell. 4) More sweet moments and maybe yami ryou causing hell? That would make things really interesting if he showed up and screwed around with her mind. But heavy schizophrenia is probably best avoided. (But playing with it sounds fun) 5) Nope 6) Keep up good work? Love her attitude and how things are going. Sorry I can't help with writer's block. I'm more into just reading things at the moment. Oh, and I'm taking a vote. This is totally up to you readers. Do you guys want a lemon? ~ Answer: Up ta you. It would be nice to see, but many authors screw it up, so I'm a little hesitant on deciding yes or no. Might be fun tho... :)
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Title: k
Reviewed By: La Che` On: July 11, 2004 18:07 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love the story so far itz great....it seems very realistic i can totally imagin this happenin to ppl. I don't kno wat to tell u cuz it seems to be perect already...but i think u should introduce more characters into the story. Other than that its all good.
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Title: sorry guys
Reviewed By: meimei (#!) On: July 11, 2004 18:05 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
okay............i think it should be a romantic chapter. i'm thinking that they should become a couple in this chap. i also think that at least in one chapter the should become one, if you know what i mean, lol. i juss think that the story should be romantic. GOOD LUCK!
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Reviewed By: DesendeantsRyouDarkness [MediaMiner Member] On: June 25, 2004 16:47 CDT
Comment/Review:
Oh My God! this was sooooooo funny! glad you updated! wow,I loved it, Loved it, Loved it! wow the ending was cool Never.....play with fire, wow she sounded like an X-men there! lol anyway hope you contuine, and if you dont a knife goes through your heart! Well Sayonara and Arigato!
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Title: Cahpter 3
Reviewed By: La Che` On: June 25, 2004 14:20 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
That was good.It seems like a true story comming to life, you have a true gift in writing. Oh n thanx for the spelling thing.
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Reviewed By: meimei (duh) On: June 25, 2004 13:53 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
that was a really good story.
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