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| "A New Beginning" Reviews/Comments [ 3 ] | Reviewed By: Nekogirl3 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 23, 2007 11:20 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love it! This chapter was very well done. I love the whole family feel. So I'm guessing the pairing is Kakashi/Haya/Iruka. I find that so cute. I love Genma and Raido inthis too. I'm really enjoying this. I now make you a promise. I will try my very best to review every chapter after this to show my support. Keep up the good work.
| Reviewed By: twilight aura [MediaMiner Member] On: September 16, 2004 22:51 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
same for me!^^ i justluv this story!^^it is so goin on my faves!^^and that teaser you had on there was well umm...confusein but im sure you will level it out later!!>..
| Reviewed By: Phsycobratt [MediaMiner Member] On: June 22, 2004 02:59 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow, this is really good. I wasn't really checking for spelling or grammar, but it made sense to me, so I gave you a 9. Other than that, this story is pretty original. I like your style of writting too, your very detailed, I like that. Anyway. I hope you finish the next chapter soon, I can't wait to read it.
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