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| "3 Worlds Tournament" Reviews/Comments [ 14 ] | Title: can i be in it?
Reviewed By: SesshomaruInuyashaKagome [MediaMiner Member] On: December 28, 2004 20:00 CST
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Name:Meg Age:17 World of Origin:Demon Race:Dog Demon Hair: blonde with highlights to the shoulders Skin: tanned Height: 5'9 Weight: 137 Build: slim with some muscles Clothing 1: baby blue tank top with navy blue sweat with a navy blue windbreaker and tennis shoes or slippers Clothing 2: a short fighting kimono with slippers or tennis shoes Fighting Style: Speed, Strength, Defense, and stealth Atk Technique 1: Ice balls Atk Technique 2: Rath's fire Atk Technique 3: Halo's wave Atk Technique 4: Naomi's shield Support Technique 1: Darkness Support Technique 2: Transformation Weapons (if any): katana, a bow, and a fighting sword
| Title: Wha...??
Reviewed By: Katsumi Sagara [MediaMiner Member] On: August 13, 2004 13:08 CDT
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Wherefore art thou Black Angel Knight???? Oi, that sounded horribly corny but oh well. Are ya ever gonna update? It been a very long time and this one really wants to read the story. Hope I'm not sounding like a pest but there has been no update. ^^
| Reviewed By: A freakish freaky anime freak [MediaMiner Member] On: July 31, 2004 16:50 CDT
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Forget the first one I posted here is the new one! Name:Amai Soshi Otome Gender:Female Age:400,looks 18 World of Origin:Makai Race:HalfLightning,HalfShadow Kitsune Hair:Blonde with purple streaks Skin:pale Height:6'8" Weight:101lbs Build: slightly muscular Extra: tail is purple with yellow tips and ears are yellow with purple tips. Clothing 1: A black tanktop with the words "I pity you for being weak" in light purple with yellow pants and combat boots. Clothing 2: A stripless purple shirt with macthing black capris and white sneakers. Fighting Style: Attack Intelegent Atk Technique 1:Lightning material-makes any weapon out of lightning Atk Technique 2: Lightning blast- energy that forms in the hands and shoots at the victim as lightning Atk Technique 3:Shadow fist-Shadow powers come into the fist and cause the victim to go to hell with terrible slashs and bruises. it is impossible to counterattack Atk Technique 4:Darkness army-various shadow youkais attack the victim Support Technique 1: Midnight Shadow- makes everything go in complete darkness and powers up any shadow attack. Support Technique 2: Heavenly Bliss-blinds the victim until the match is over. It also increases Lightning attacks.
| Reviewed By: A freakish freaky anime freak [MediaMiner Member] On: July 31, 2004 13:05 CDT
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Name:Amai Soshi Otome Age:200, but looks about 18 Gender:felmale World of Origin:Makai Race:Kitsune Hair:long,silky,silver hair Eyes:hazel Skin:pale Height:About6'8" Weight:101lbs. Build:a bit muscular Clothing 1: a silver tank top with matching pants. Clothing 2: A black strapless shirt with a matching white skirt and a silver jacket. Fighting Style:Speed
| Reviewed By: Sadeo [MediaMiner Member] On: July 26, 2004 23:00 CDT
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Okay, I think you might want to know that Akira's male and he's friendly, polite, gentle, loyal, shy, quiet, and thoughtfull.
| Reviewed By: Sadeo [MediaMiner Member] On: July 26, 2004 22:58 CDT
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Name:Akira Kurama Himura Age:234 World of Origin:Makai Race:(Human, Demon, Mixed, or Other)youko Hair: reddish, blackish, brown, goes to waist Skin:white, Height: 6 feet eleven inches Weight: 456 Build: slim and slender; very feminine Clothing 1: midnight blue tunic, emerald slacks and crimson sash Clothing 2: dark crimson vest that cuts off at forearms over jet black long sleeved shirt and silver slacks (note:he often carries a small duffel/cargo bag) Fighting Style:[Pure Physical Strength, Speed, Pure Defense, Defense and Counterattack] Defense stealth, speed,counterattack (like Sensui), Attack Rush, Attack Intelegent (like Kurama), stealth, or Other] 4 Attack Techniques and 2 Support Techniques (nothing "all-powerful") Atk Technique 1: Galeo (sends out a huge beam of ligh and automacticlly summons a serpent to the area and eats the opponent) Atk Technique 2: Firespin (creates a massive fire cycloe. It feeds off the soul and life energybefore burning the victim) Atk Technique 3: Darkness Wave (exactly what it's name suggests. The massive wave is similer to a tidal wave and knocks off at half of the victim's health) Atk Technique 4: Blood Frenzy (sends user into blood lusty rage causing them to crave blood and gore non-stop.) Support Technique 1: (These techniques enhance your powers in some way) Heaven's Charm (this weakens oppentnets to almost no health and heals user and their allies) I need to seperate this!
| Title: THANK YOU!!
Reviewed By: Katsumi Sagara [MediaMiner Member] On: June 30, 2004 15:36 CDT
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YAY! ^^ Thanks for putting me in! I can't wait to read the story. Thanks again. ^^
| Title: I am too descriptive...sorry
Reviewed By: Shihaisha [MediaMiner Member] On: June 23, 2004 14:34 CDT
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continued...you rush at opponent/flames surge inward with you/if it works they are unable to defend/you land a crippling blow. Atk Tech(4): Seishi hino suitoru "flame of life & death absorb" this atk is used in conjuction with Atk(1)(preferably if you use the sphere thing) you merge with the flames and try to absorb your opponent with you/highly dangerous/very draining since you don't have your sword to fuel you/if successful opponent is weakened(note you do not abosrb the energy into yourself)S Tech(1): Gisei "sacrifice" (this is not perfected) in a weakened/crippled state/ you pierce your heart with the flame version of your sword/when an enemy is attacking you/if all goes well you absorb the power of the attack/gaining strength/draining opponent. S Tech(2): Suzaku no megumi "phoenix's blessing" this is a tech that is not mastered/this allows you to change into the bird of legend and atk as such(human side makes this difficult)Weapon: katana *side note* Ok that is it I promise! I hope this is usable I try to offer balanced char. I am not a fan of making my creations all powerful. I just want to say that Setsuko has always prefered her human side and has never felt the need to master her other. Hense why the unmastered tech. She loves Ningen Kai and would do anything to protect it. I apologize for the length! Hope this is what you need! If you don't use it it's ok...^_^
| Title: Ok I'll give this a whirl, never done one of these before...
Reviewed By: Shihaisha [MediaMiner Member] On: June 23, 2004 14:02 CDT
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Name:Setsuko Gender:F but you can make a M if need be. Age:19 World of Origin: Ningen Kai Race:Human/phoenix(prefers humans)Height:5'8 Weight:120 Hair:black(waist length)half down/half pulled up in a bun. Eyes:Orange(leaning to the red side not yellow)Skin:fair Clothes(1):hakama(dark grey)2 yukatas(inner/red outer/sky grey like ash)red sash tied at waste holds katana. red ribbon in hair to hold bun. Clothes(2): Only difference is she wears some time of fuedal armor(whatever you want)Fighting style:speed/strategy Atk Tech(1)Eien hi no ken hanasu "eternal flame of the sword seperate" katana splits into two/used to counter/can create a barrier of flames/w 2 swords or can encirlce herself/opponent(phantom sword absorbs back into original) Atk Tech(2)Seishi Hino "flame of life and death" invokes the sword's power/more of an energy Atk/long distance/flames seek out opponent so that you can try to flank opponent with another Atk.(keyword 'try' doesn't always work)Atk Tech(3): Hi no zenmatsu saseru "flame of annihilation" you do a series of attacks/basically trade blows/weaving a network of points using your inner flame(basically your own life energy) if all goes well your opponent gets hemmed in by flames/if not well then your opponent can deal you a drastic blow and cripple/defeat you/after being hemmed in the flames surge together enclosing the opponent/you are reflected in the flames/so the opponent sees multipe yous/1 is you others illusions/draw points together & Atk.
| Reviewed By: Black Angel Knight [MediaMiner Member] On: June 22, 2004 18:57 CDT
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Good Job Katsumi Sagara, just what I was looking for. No trace of Mary Sue, and very usable. You have a place in the fic. I will be accepting 5-7 more combatants. Total combatants=2, Saris Lauri(Katsumi Sagara), and Grey Angel (my character)
| Reviewed By: Katsumi Sagara [MediaMiner Member] On: June 22, 2004 18:13 CDT
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Name:Saris Lauri Age:17 World of Origin: Demon Race:Wolf Demon Hair:silver and in a long braid (Fur on ears and tail is black) Skin:white, very pale Height:5'10 Weight:135lbs Build: slim but with some muscle Clothing 1: blackpants with red sleeveless shirt Clothing 2: purple sleeveless bodysuit with black jacket and high black boots Fighting Style: Speed and stealth Atk Technique 1: crescent (sends a force of power in an attack by a clawing motion) Atk Technique 2:shadow blade (stabs enemy with an invisible blade of energy) Atk Technique 3: Paralytic bite ( biting down on the neck and collerbone, paralyzing an enemy) Atk Technique 4:Nature's call (A wave of power relased at an enemy through a flurry of false wolves) Support Technique 1: Shadow phase (hiding self in the shadows and reapearring somewhere else by moving in them) Support Technique 2: Change (take either a full wolf form or a more animal half form to increase attack strength) Weapons (if any): Will use dual short blades, claws and teeth also
| Reviewed By: Tetsumi [MediaMiner Member] On: June 22, 2004 15:30 CDT
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Name:Hebi Age:16 World of oringin:Makai Race:dragon Hair:long black down to thighs with dark green highlights kin:tan,very soft Height:5,2 Weight:105 Build:slightly Clothes:(1)an outfit like laura croft's but black with boots that come up to knees also black/flatheeled boots Clothes:(2)dark green chinese dress that goes down to ankles/has dragon designs in black/slit up to thigh on left side Fighting style:speed,attack intelegent Techniques(4) 1:Jigoku's mon:gates of hell open and the opponet falls into hell 2:Dragon plags:when the opponet gets three plags:1st goes blind 2nd:can't move 3rd:soul is sucked from their bodys 3:sirens scream:her scream blows up their heads 4:Death:calls apon the grim reaper to kill her enemy(only works on some enemys) ST 1:clouded sight:makes her enemy go blind ST 2:amulet:a amulet she wears around her neck/where she stores her energy Weapons:twin katanas.Well thats every thing hope I can be in ^_^Good luck!!!
| Reviewed By: LinkinTears88 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 22, 2004 04:19 CDT
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Um....yea it cut me off well here's the rest!The Second Support Technique is called Shadow Rings that appear on her wrists that tap into her life energy.Other:She has a demon form that has white hair and dark grey-blue eyes with no pupils(think Kanna from Inuyasha) and her wings,ears,and tail are black with red tips and she has a black cat demon with the same red tip ears and tail and on the first ST I meant small shadow soul stealers steal some of her opponets energy trick is her opponets can't see them....Well there the rest of it!Hope I'm in the fic!Ja ne!
| Reviewed By: LinkinTears88 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 22, 2004 04:01 CDT
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Name:Tatsuki Age:15 World of origin:Makai Race:Human/Angel/Shadow Hair:Waist long,jet black with red tip bangs that slight cover her eyes Eyes:Violet purple that look almost midnight blue Skin:Smooth,slight tan Height:5'5 Weight:110 Build:Slight Clothes:(1)Black spegetti strap tank top that stops a few inches above belly button with black fishnet elbow length fingerless gloves and low rise black baggy jeans with a black jacket wrapped around waist with red and orange flames riseing from bottom of pants and black combat boots(2)Red spegetti strap tank top with black fingerless gloves low rise black baggy jeans with chains hanging from belt holes and blck combat boots Fighting Style:Stealth,Attack Rush,Attack Intelegent 4 Attack Techniques- AT(1)Angel's Purification:Seeks evil in opponet turning it into a currupted spirit beast which consumes them AT(2)Angelic Melody:She plays a fute that plays mellow tune that feeds off spirit energy,draining her opponet of their energy turning into one gaigantic light beam AT(3)Surrounding Darkness:Feeds off spirit energy but in turn creates a void in her opponet that begins to slowly and painfully suck them in sending them into another diemension AT(4)Everlasting Nightmare:She creates a shadow barrier around opponet trapping them while she summons a shadow spirit that feeds off their spirit energy,life energy and their soul leaveing nothing except the hollow body ST(1)Soul Stealer:Small shdow creatures that her opponets energy ST(2)Shadows R |
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