| "wild saiya-jin" Reviews/Comments [ 3 ] |
Reviewed By: darkwoofe [MediaMiner Member] On: November 26, 2004 23:40 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
Really interesting start, although I'd keep the number of worlds ranma/gina travels to, to just the DBZ world. Too many crossovers will ruin what could otherwise be a pretty good story. Also if Ranma remembers her training from her last life it should show a little more and be combined with any training she got from goku and chichi. I hope to see another chapter soon.
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Reviewed By: zerotolerance On: July 10, 2004 19:41 CDT
Comment/Review:
I think you should have left Ranma a guy,no offense but i think you should rewrite the whole thing.And leave Ranma a guy.And maybe later you could have him meet the NWC again after a few years have past.
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Reviewed By: Huge On: April 05, 2003 22:03 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
do more please |
