| "The Plan" Reviews/Comments [ 4 ] |
Reviewed By: Mill On: September 23, 2005 23:32 CDT
Comment/Review:
MOOOOOOOOOORE! Oh my sides ache! Very well done! ^____^
|
Reviewed By: Mala Darkling [MediaMiner Member] On: August 05, 2004 20:25 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
to say what evvybody else said, that was HILARIOUS! You are very good. I was thinking for a job ( I know it's kinda cliche, but still) he tries to be a waitress, and someone tells him to do something or makes a lewd comment, and he tries to kill them. ^-^ I'm adding you to favs so I know when you update, and it better be soon! ^____^
|
Reviewed By: michew [MediaMiner Member] On: June 29, 2004 15:42 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
lmfao that was hilarious!!! im gonna die!!! plz update soon!!!
|
Reviewed By: Phsycobratt (too lazy to log in) On: June 28, 2004 01:46 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
HA HA HA HA HA HA HA HA HA HA! THAT WAS HILARIOUS! HA HA HA... YOU HAVE TO CONTINUE THIS...HA HA HA HA *stops for breath* HA HA! *sigh* I'm okay now, well anyways, great job, bye.
|
