| "Balance" Reviews/Comments [ 12 ] |
Reviewed By: tin797 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 03, 2005 22:53 CDT
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I just realised Mediaminer email alerts for favourite fics has nt been working for a while. You did quite a few chapters and i didnt know! Nvm, i will be sure to check out this story every once and then for updates, keep writing!
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Reviewed By: xiaoyu_mitsurugi On: July 27, 2005 19:20 CDT
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This story is really good! Please update soon!
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Reviewed By: TT On: June 14, 2005 11:52 CDT
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This is good this is great! please write somemore! i am putting you in favorites!
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Title: asf iwoegna
Reviewed By: skfui7 On: November 02, 2004 09:40 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Really enjoying this so far..update :)
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Reviewed By: me On: August 11, 2004 23:09 CDT
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how did he get out? did he suck up his pride and apoligize? hahaha, i couldn't imagine vegeta doing that. hehehee. well now, what's bulma going to do when goku's not around?
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Title: Balance
Reviewed By: mlf On: August 06, 2004 16:03 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OGM that was sssssssssoooooo funny.i just want to get together already.and you know that i notice about that but i just thought that you where going to change it up alittle.so oh well.just update sooon ok....maria
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Title: Balance
Reviewed By: mlf On: July 19, 2004 19:19 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
nnoooooooooo don't have her sleep with yamcha(oh i'm going to be sick)please don't let her.any way i love what you did to vegeta lmao he deserves it.lol can't wait to read how he gets out of this one...so please update soom ....maria
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Reviewed By: Caralin Fury [MediaMiner Member] On: July 19, 2004 00:25 CDT
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Vegeta's anger is quite amusing! I can just picture him pinned to the floor, spitting useless curses at Bulma. I love, love, LOVE Bulma and Vegeta fics. I will be eagerly watching for the update on this one! Caralin
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Reviewed By: butterflyV On: July 18, 2004 18:43 CDT
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It's definitely different, keep going.
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Reviewed By: debbiechan [MediaMiner Member] On: July 16, 2004 08:55 CDT
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while I do think there is such a thing as a bad B/V, this isn't one of them! I'm drawn to read them all myself :-) Interesting starting off with death fic intensity (oh, save her please?) but the a/n's in both chapters *do* disrupt the mood. Use your wit within the storyline (I really liked Bulma saying "Careful Vegeta, you're starting to sound out of character!" LOL!) Keep writing! We'll keep reading! debbiechan
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Title: "Balance
Reviewed By: maccam [MediaMiner Member] On: June 24, 2004 16:34 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
wow how sad to know that your love onw is going to die...can't wait to read more
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Reviewed By: GetaGirl 247 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 24, 2004 11:10 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is nice fic, and I don't think that it was sappy at all. Come on they have not one, but two kids together. If he really didn't love her, they wouldn't be together in the end of DBZ or in GT at all. Good story, keep it going. Just let Vegeta die right after Bulma, I coulnd't picture him with anybody else.
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