| "High Summoner’s Daughters" Reviews/Comments [ 3 ] |
Reviewed By: mew_01 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 04, 2007 19:34 CST
Comment/Review:
PLEASE UPDATE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: mew_01 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 11, 2005 11:43 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love your story! I almost cried when braska said that even if i die i still love you both. that was so sad T.T please write more. thankies!!
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Title: Uh..
Reviewed By: MizuYume [MediaMiner Member] On: June 29, 2004 00:47 CDT
Comment/Review:
When Lord Braska defeats sin, Yuna is 7. In the game when she's actually on her pilgrimage, she's 17. Ten years difference... Tidus will be 17 too. By the way, how old is Marina? Oh yeah... contractions are your friends... when it's possesive it's your... when it's indicating you are something it's either you're or you are... oh and check on your spelling. Please continue soon.
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