| "Winter Memoirs: Forbidden Hearts" Reviews/Comments [ 11 ] |
Reviewed By: DeniCamuiTsukino [MediaMiner Member] On: June 18, 2007 23:51 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This seems like it's gonna be an awesome story! Please continue! I can't see past chapter three if there's more...
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Reviewed By: SkyIce [MediaMiner Member] On: September 06, 2004 20:03 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
PLEASE UPDATE! *gets on hands and knees* I'm begging you! I wanna know what happens next!
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Reviewed By: SkyIce [MediaMiner Member] On: August 04, 2004 10:41 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This story is really good! ^_^ I like it a lot! PLease continue, i wanna know what happens next! ^_________________^
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Reviewed By: Kage Hikari [MediaMiner Member] On: July 22, 2004 17:11 CDT
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*growls* I don't care if you're on vacation! You could at least write another chapter or something on paper! *twitches* Sorry if I'm being a bit mean I just happen to be on a sugar high...>>
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Reviewed By: Kage Hikari [MediaMiner Member] On: July 22, 2004 17:07 CDT
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I like this chapter! So much like Hige and Tsume to quarrel like that ne? More writing and updating please!
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Reviewed By: Kage Hikari [MediaMiner Member] On: July 22, 2004 17:01 CDT
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The story is good so far, just like Kiba-kun to show up in like two seconds to save the day ne? More chapters are a must! I like the Satu/Kiba pairing if there is going to be one...if not then i feel like a baka.
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Reviewed By: kawaii yasha [MediaMiner Member] On: July 20, 2004 01:08 CDT
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i luv it!!!! update soon
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Reviewed By: Satans Widdle Hellper [MediaMiner Member] On: July 18, 2004 00:05 CDT
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Eh...Satu seems a little...'okay' for being raped. Rape is trauma regardless of whether or not the victim is conscious. I don't think she'd be so 'lively' afterwards. The most common after-effect of rape is to feel dirty or to feel guilty for it somehow being the victim's fault...as he/she encourage the rapist. I personally think this chapter COULD have been better but I understand that with reviews comes the demand to please the reviewers. I'd be hypocritical if I faulted you for trying to please readers. I look forward to the next chapter.
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Reviewed By: youkos girl [MediaMiner Member] On: July 16, 2004 21:54 CDT
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that was good story or 2 chapters but so far u got me adicted to it i hope it is satu kiba thing because if i cant have kiba i like it when another from a cartoon has him but i have to like her and i like the girl in ur story she kinda sonds like me well u better update soon and that was one killer clifie u left i hate 4 that but please please please update must read more
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Reviewed By: Satans Widdle Hellper [MediaMiner Member] On: July 14, 2004 20:33 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I like this fic. I know the readers at mm.org are stingy with reviews but don't take it personally, they're just assholes who wouldn't know a good story if it bit them in the ass. I would like to see a Satu/Kiba/Tsume trio though. Why have one when you can have both? XD
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Reviewed By: Kawii-Chan [MediaMiner Member] On: July 02, 2004 00:19 CDT
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Hey, I really like your fic. You better continue!! And I hope you continue soon cause that was a very evil cliffie. I think Kiba would be a good match for her. But thats your decision for who you want who to be paired up with. Im just a big Kiba fanatic.
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