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Reviewed By: Kurinju-sama [MediaMiner Member] On: May 09, 2007 21:06 CDT
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That was seriously fucked up. In a good way though...if that's possible. I'm not flaming your work that is to say. You are an absolute geneus when it comes to writing. I usually don't read fics this dark, but I must say you have an outstanding talent for it. Absolutly amazing. Kudose.
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Reviewed By: Rose of Sharon [MediaMiner Member] On: January 23, 2007 16:37 CST
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What do I think? Wow....
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Title: Awesome!
Reviewed By: HentaiLover [MediaMiner Member] On: July 19, 2005 20:59 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Man! You seriously cannot write a bad fic! I loved this one! It started with 'poor Kagome'... but it ended so sweet! You're the BEST!
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Title: nice
Reviewed By: Dark Avenger [MediaMiner Member] On: April 28, 2005 02:01 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
humm... that was about as dark as my own fic... I have to day that I enjoyed it even though Naraku is an evil bastard. And I must thank you for not making Inu and Kagome go at it right after like so many others have. Nice job & thanks.
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Title: that is SO sweet in the end
Reviewed By: Dark_Lady_69 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 18, 2004 12:43 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
wow T_T even after everything that happened to her inuyasha was a TRUE gentalman and told her all the things she so desperetly needed to hear from the man she loved and cared for. i think she will be ok now and inuyasha will most defiantly be there to help her all the way. this story has SO much potental and you should MOST defiantly do a continuation
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Title: OMG!
Reviewed By: Dark Angel Of Love [MediaMiner Member] On: September 15, 2004 17:35 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
that was great! i mean it was a good story and everything! except poor kagome got it bad in the begining,but i totally love the ending! i mean,things between inuyasha and kagome are definitely going to be different.hay,how about making a continuction fic? THAT would be great! like how inuyasha and kagome get through it all and when kagome finally becomes inuyasha's mate ^_~ anyway please please please write more! i'll definitely read it! ^_^
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Reviewed By: Zelix [MediaMiner Member] On: August 06, 2004 05:24 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow... beautiful, fucking beautiful... started so darkly and then ended with like that... my god, this thing deserves a sequel of some sort, no doubt there...
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Reviewed By: EvilAngel69 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 12, 2004 20:47 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Naraku is a sick, SICK bastard and i think that the way the story progressed was kool, especially when Inuyasha still loved her in the end. KAWAII!!!! :-)
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Reviewed By: CandyKrazy [MediaMiner Member] On: July 02, 2004 21:21 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh my God, you are bloody brilliant! I could almost feel Kagome's pain, and Inuyasha still loved her in the end, good job, JA NE!!!
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Reviewed By: Inubunny [MediaMiner Member] On: July 01, 2004 10:26 CDT
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that was sad yet it turned out to b great in the end!! i loved it!!! and true love wins again!! long live the love!!! the love makes the world go round!!!! much love never forget the love!!! the story was great!! i hope for there to b more like it!!!
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Reviewed By: lere [MediaMiner Member] On: June 30, 2004 03:50 CDT
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OH GOD! That was horrible! Poor girl! I never saw a rape fiction like this, but I think you described her terror and agony VERY well. And Inu saw the whole thing!!!! I just can't imagine how he felt! But the final was so sweet and he was perfect taking care of her body and soul. Please! You MUST write more! How he will make it up for her, how she'll bare the hard time and how they will fix that together. It will be a fantastic continuation fic about how build a deep relationship after so many problems. They always had a dificult relationship but I think the rape changed everything, most to Inu. You MUST write about this!!!! Big hugs from Brazil and sorry about my poor english. Lere
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Reviewed By: Umi2583 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 30, 2004 00:58 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I dont think it's possible for you to write a bad lemon. 0_0 I love your style {you're willing to say what it takes to get the...imagery across^^} and all your lemons/stories have great heart in them--especially this one. I like the Kag/Mir pairing, but here, Inu's the obvious choice. I always look forward to your updates, and I hope you update again soon! ^_^
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Reviewed By: Lady Battousai [MediaMiner Member] On: June 29, 2004 22:20 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
how there is a lot of sex in there eh? lmao. aww it is soo cute how inuyasha still loved her in the end...i mean u know he would be still. i thought that they were goin' to do it in the end hehehe i mean she already did it with Naraku so why not with Inuyasha lol but Naraku like killed her eh? i mean i can't even think if someone was doin' that to me. well...i would kill the person before they got the chance but meh w/e GREAT STORY i loved this story like i have loved all ur others so...come on make another one lol jokz jokz byez *kiss*
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Title: good write
Reviewed By: viletwistedfaery [MediaMiner Member] On: June 29, 2004 21:59 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
that was the most beautiful thing i have ever read. it's not ever day that you read about some one getting raped and the one they love forgiving them. this was the the best thing me and my friends have ever read.
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