| "Love- Life and Death" Reviews/Comments [ 19 ] |
Reviewed By: neku [MediaMiner Member] On: December 03, 2005 13:04 CST
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nery nice
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Reviewed By: Erika On: August 20, 2004 19:01 CDT
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1.) Think Mai's first vision on what the others would say to will come true? yes 2.) Was Yugi right to forgive Mai? Would you forgive her if you were in his shoes? maybe 3.) You think Mai made the right decision on being single until another comes along? Would you do the same? maybe 4.) Finally, does Mai have what it takes to carry on her promise? Would you have the strength to do so? i think yes
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Reviewed By: dragonandswordmaster On: August 20, 2004 17:25 CDT
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Yugi said it all, this was really good, and I can't wait to see what else you have in store for us for this beautiful story. If this chapter was a foreshadow of what things are to come, then I can't wait to see the next chapter of this awesome story!
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Reviewed By: wing angel On: August 14, 2004 22:49 CDT
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make more soon
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Reviewed By: wing angel On: August 14, 2004 22:49 CDT
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make more soon
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Reviewed By: wing white angel On: July 28, 2004 22:22 CDT
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make mpre
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Reviewed By: wing white angel On: July 28, 2004 22:22 CDT
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make mpre
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Reviewed By: wing white angel On: July 28, 2004 22:22 CDT
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make mpre
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Title: T_T
Reviewed By: K.C. Whitestar On: July 27, 2004 17:51 CDT
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1.) How do you think the others will handle the news, once they get wind of it? Beat the hell of out of Mai and Joey 2.) How do you think Anastasia will feel towards her mom and Joey when she find out? Growup hateing them and loving them at the same time 3.) You feel pity for Yugi, for him seeing what he saw and his actions? Pity? No, I pity Mai, not Yugi. 4.) How do you judge Mai, on her actions throughout the entire scene? What would you say or do to her? Bitch slap her and bitch at her.
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Reviewed By: wing angel On: July 26, 2004 15:17 CDT
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make more
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Reviewed By: wing angel On: July 26, 2004 15:17 CDT
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make more
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Reviewed By: wing angel On: July 18, 2004 16:25 CDT
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please make more
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Reviewed By: wing-angel On: July 11, 2004 01:25 CDT
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please update more
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Title: wow, Best story ever
Reviewed By: ChAoTiC-LoRd On: July 10, 2004 03:38 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
OMG, this is the best one-shot Yugi that you ever wrote. I love it and i love the fact that Mai feel guilty for what she did. Committed adultery is something that i take to my heart. I see the bible in a strang way. You see, i believe in the bible yet in some sense i kind of mis understood some of the meaning from the bible. Adultery is something that i will forgived and forget but not without a price. Heh, i don't know why but this is like the best one-shot that you wrote. But I don't know why you put with mai? I mean, she's big(breast area) but she look older too in the T.V Show. I wonder why you put up with her. P:S: wrote more of this, i don't care if its dark.
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Reviewed By: Ssaffr01 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 03, 2004 11:56 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Man, that was deep. But, it's a good read.
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Reviewed By: _dark_magician_girl On: July 02, 2004 21:10 CDT
Rating(s):Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
oh my gawd how depressing.*teardrop*please acceept my review even though i'm not a member i would appreciate it.
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Reviewed By: Sword Master Jeff On: July 02, 2004 02:43 CDT
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This was not only dark but also deep. I feel sorry for Mai and Yugi as well as their child. However, that doesn't sound like something Joey would go and do behind his best friend's back, or let Tristan date/marry Tristan. I'm actually surprised that you could write something as deep and as dark as this. I can see another chapter out of this, but then again I could be wrong.
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Reviewed By: Erika On: July 01, 2004 15:14 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
1.) How do you think the others will handle the news, once they get wind of it? I think they get very sad and upset. 2.) How do you think Anastasia will feel towards her mom and Joey when she find out? I think she get mad and never want to see or speak to them again. 3.) You feel pity for Yugi, for him seeing what he saw and his actions? Yes I feel sorry for him and I wish he didn't have to kill himself but If I lived for love and that had happen to me I think I would do the same. It is so horrible when a heart is broken and promise. 4.) How do you judge Mai, on her actions throughout the entire scene? What would you say or do to her? I think I would slap her on face (as long as Anastasia wasn't there) and say that was stupid thing you did, you should have control herself and think about how Yugi would feel and what was the wedding ring that he had given you for? I thought it was sign of your love and that you promise to be by his side him as long as you lived and what about Anastasia, how would she feel if she knew that her mother was making love with another man that wasn't her father and now what your going to tell her about her what happen to father and what you have done with Joey? And you can't lie to her forever, she will find out truth sooner or later. And if someone else asks you to marry him, you think about it more.
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Reviewed By: Erika On: July 01, 2004 13:33 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
please update and please update on your other fanfictions.
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