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| "Ikasha, the Quarter Demon" Reviews/Comments [ 3 ] | Reviewed By: Storyweaver1 On: July 09, 2004 19:57 CDT
Comment/Review:
Chapter 12, I have been waiting so long for this chapter! Sword Master Jeff had to tell me about this site! The part were Sejie, LOL, fell asleep in the middle of his sentence was hilarious, and so was the part with Sango and Miroku. But I do feel bad for Konami.
| Reviewed By: Storyweaver1 On: July 09, 2004 19:49 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
YOU ARE A BIG MEANIE! WHY DIDN"T YOU TELL ME YOU WEREN'T POSTING ON FF.NET ANYMORE! Ok, now that I got that out of my system, I can review. LOL, Inuyasha and Koga's fights were very funny. ' Our fathers are werid' line, that was funny too.
| Reviewed By: Ryjin-san On: July 02, 2004 23:40 CDT
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I would Register with this, the only problem is that they don't have a Code Lyoko section in the Anime department. I already have five chapters of my story and I already have something like fifty reviews. So I do not want to just forget about it, especially when someone dies. I'm not telling you who because then you wouldn't read the story. I can't wait to see what else you have in store for Ikasha, but hopefully she will regain her memory soon. I actually feel sorry for her, especially since she lost her memory and all of that. I also liked it when Kouga just nodded off in the middle of his sentence. I can't wait to see all of your other stories here on this site, but I think I can wait to see what will happen next time on al of your other stories as well. Whew! that was probably my longest review on this site here, so far. Oh, I also have AIM, to get one just go to AOL.com and go to downloads. Well, see ya when I see ya. Ja ne Akemi-kun!!
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