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Title: its
Reviewed By: dragonboydan On: July 16, 2005 04:23 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 1 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
the fic is good but NEko fix ur spelling god damnit if i have to tutor u myself it will be fixed!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Title: cool idea, so-so writing.
Reviewed By: Al Shaitan On: June 22, 2005 18:38 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 3 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 2 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 5 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 3 of 10
Overall Rating: 3 of 10 Comment/Review:
I thought the crossover concept was pretty good, but you didn't seem to be able to decide if you wanted to write a story or a play. Switching in and out of regular paragraphs and first person narration (such as at the beginning) and then into play-style is really unpleasant to read. So write a story, with paragraphs, and punctuation, and complete sentences if you're going to write a story, and write a play if you're going to write a play. Make up your mind. Play-style writing below: NAME: This fic has some profanity in it, doesn't it? NAME: Fuck yeah! That leads to my second point... you had too much useless swearing. Don't bother, it doesn't make your story better. And nobody says 'jugs.''
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Title: Great gob cuss
Reviewed By: cosplay_queen_Lisa On: June 08, 2005 16:06 CDT
Comment/Review:
you did a great job on your fic Neko, it took me long enuf to finsh it, you left so plot holes open, you beter fix it in your next one. :)
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Title: cool
Reviewed By: linkin_park_fan_girl On: June 07, 2005 17:10 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
man that story is nuts. the people in the story sound like there real. are they? Pixy rocks bye the way.
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Title: Deh Review
Reviewed By: Loki-TheGRimScreamer On: April 18, 2005 15:03 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 5 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I finally found the damn thing!! XD XD XD I was laughing the entire time, so it's pretty good. It was so long too - so it, thankfully, killed some time. Overall enjoyable and highly recommended. ~ Loki (Bianca XD)
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Reviewed By: Yumia On: April 07, 2005 23:58 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is such a cool Fanfic I just luv it luv it but you spelling could be better
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Title: ...im not sure
Reviewed By: idonthaveone On: February 18, 2005 13:34 CST
Comment/Review:
hmm...lets see...i havent read quite it all...but i will in the.....who am i kidding...idont have a computer...any way great job.
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Title: poop
Reviewed By: crazin asian On: February 02, 2005 13:40 CST
Comment/Review:
it's weird....but funny...if i had an ass...i would laugh it off...lol
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Reviewed By: Mirokus Wench [MediaMiner Member] On: February 01, 2005 17:56 CST
Comment/Review:
tee-hee-ha-ha-ho-ho! okay i'll stop. anyway i really liked it, i don't know why but i did. okay it was freakil' halarious! thanx for lettin' me laugh so damn hard, excel(mirokus wench)*_* ^-^
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Title: Bloody awsome Don
Reviewed By: The_Dark_Angel [MediaMiner Member] On: February 01, 2005 08:00 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hey don its Marc...bloody good on ya man!! you did good !^_^! .i cant wait for the next one...ps i better be in it lol i know were you live.
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Reviewed By: raisins [MediaMiner Member] On: January 25, 2005 22:02 CST
Comment/Review:
Well. You need to do some polishing. Run this thing through a spell checker, minimum. Come on, man! Even your title is misspelled. It's only two words, for Chrisakes!
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Title: cool
Reviewed By: D_U_D_E On: January 25, 2005 10:27 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
cool The people you added are funny, I like pixy the most. O Are you relly in Pixy's basement?
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Title: Good Job
Reviewed By: callmedick [MediaMiner Member] On: January 05, 2005 19:51 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Good job on the fanfic man, Rick the shark kid is awesome... and he's also based off of me! Yay! The story is grat the concept is awesome but you could use a few more real-life characters, but I can't wait to read about the high school!
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Title: hey don
Reviewed By: The_Dark_Angel [MediaMiner Member] On: January 04, 2005 11:34 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Comment/Review:
hey don its marc..dont let the get ya down i know is a great fanfic.but ya you do need more charaters...lol pixy said put me n...you know iam a great charater.see ya...ps this fanfic rules so if ya dont like is f**k off!
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Title: umm
Reviewed By: dragon boy dan On: December 07, 2004 18:39 CST
Comment/Review:
this fanfiction is pretty good but it needs a better story line you need to fix alot of spelling errors and you need more characters a character that could turn into a dragon would be cool but besides that its great
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