| "Siren's Song" Reviews/Comments [ 26 ] |
Reviewed By: AyameNatsuki [MediaMiner Member] On: June 17, 2009 01:01 CDT
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I've stumbled upon this story and it is very interesting and i would love to know what would happen next, but im assuming since most of the updates are in 05 and before your not updating anymore? Well, if you do, i would love to read it!
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Title: La?
Reviewed By: hinageshichankyoko [MediaMiner Member] On: December 19, 2005 12:19 CST
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I like the way your story is coming long. In parts it drags along a bit but it isn't overly in my opinion. It is very amusing the way your characters act around each! Please update soon!!
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Title: OMG
Reviewed By: hinageshichankyoko [MediaMiner Member] On: December 04, 2005 13:43 CST
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This story is very good!!!! Ahh...I want to know what happens!! Evil people capturing Hiei....
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Title: weeellll..
Reviewed By: Reikka_Shinen [MediaMiner Member] On: April 19, 2005 18:45 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
Well I can definitly say that I liked the other chapters more. This one was just to boring, confusing, and lack of dialouge. When I first started reading your story, I loved it. But I think that you're dragging it along to much, it's getting boring and the story is falling apart. MORE ROMANCE. It's like it's a completely different story or something. Amd you are updating way to far apart. I can't even remember whats going on anymore! I might take it off of my favorites. Sorry but it could happen. So to kinda spice it up a little I suggest you should make come conflicts arise in the story. Like she gets kidnapped, or her long lost brother comes back or something. But not so hokey. Well thats my advice for the day. Any questions just email me and be sure to tell me who you are or I won't know what you are talking about. ^_^ P.S. the ratings above are just for your newest chapter.
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Reviewed By: Ryuko [MediaMiner Member] On: January 13, 2005 00:31 CST
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That was a surprize! I didn't expect her parents to be anything but humans! ^-^ I'm sooo glad you updated and I completely forgive you!
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Reviewed By: Reikka_Shinen [MediaMiner Member] On: December 28, 2004 13:02 CST
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Well gee wiz! I've been waiting for you to update since...Forever! Come on update!!!
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Title: Don't be mad at me!
Reviewed By: Shadow_Chan On: December 10, 2004 13:02 CST
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Well your story is great! It has a very good plot! ^.^ But... Your writing too many POV's. Try making them shorter... You are also writing every thing all together, making it harder to read. Try leaving more space between paragraphs... I hope you don't take this the wrong way. I'm not a flamer, but I have to tell you how to make the story much better ^.~
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Reviewed By: Ryuko [MediaMiner Member] On: December 07, 2004 19:59 CST
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you finaly updated! ^-^ this story is so well writen, update soon!
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Reviewed By: Reikka_Shinen [MediaMiner Member] On: November 07, 2004 16:29 CST
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Man I'm so glad that you finally updated! WHOOOOOO! Please update soon!
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Reviewed By: Ryuko [MediaMiner Member] On: November 07, 2004 14:29 CST
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that was an awsome chapter! stupid blane!!! you MUST update soon!!! I want to know waht happens!!! please! ja ne
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Reviewed By: darkelf137 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 03, 2004 20:19 CST
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*biting knuckles to supress laughter so i dont wake mum up* oh...my...gawd....that was SO FUNNY!!!! water balloons! genius i tell you! genius! and the story is AWESOME!...although a little tragic. update soon!
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Reviewed By: tuathafaerie [MediaMiner Member] On: October 07, 2004 21:07 CDT
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"Some come to remember, some drink to forget." Or was it come? I don't remember the exsact words, oh well! Can't wait to see what your going to do with this! Thanks for coming back! Please update agian really soon!! Tee hee! ^^ Ja ne!
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Reviewed By: Ryuko [MediaMiner Member] On: September 04, 2004 18:02 CDT
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yay you updated!!! ^_^ great chapter! I loved it! update soon!
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Reviewed By: Nenagh24 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 04, 2004 17:45 CDT
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Aww...! (Whipes a tear from her eye) That was so cute and fluffy! ^^ I'm trying to review whilst the hurricane is pulling my house down around my ears...(Crack!) Epp! (Winces) My Printer! (Cries) Stupid power surges! I'll continue reviewing for this story as long as I can get to a computer with internet access! Update soon! ^^ Ja!
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Reviewed By: Ryuko [MediaMiner Member] On: August 21, 2004 15:33 CDT
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haha your not the only one who isn't gonna update much now that school started -.-' I hope you find time soon though!
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Reviewed By: Nenagh24 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 20, 2004 18:42 CDT
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That's ok! I understand completely! Update again once you have time to! ^^ Ja!
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Reviewed By: Ryuko [MediaMiner Member] On: August 16, 2004 16:06 CDT
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yay you updated!!! ^.^ great chapter, I can't wait for the next one! update soon! ^__^
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Reviewed By: Ryuko [MediaMiner Member] On: August 08, 2004 23:28 CDT
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cool fic! please update soon! *& all the other happy review stuff people say* hehe... uhm could you lessen te author notes? sorry but I'm kind of wierd, I get so deep into the stories I read I don't even hear whats going on around me and the A/Ns kept jerking me out of it and.... whatever i guess you don't have to I'm just wierd... I still love your story though!!! ja ne!
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Reviewed By: Nenagh24 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 25, 2004 18:43 CDT
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(Snicker) Yeah, Kurama. Leave those two love birds alone! (Laughs histericly) Your story rocks! Please update really, really, soon! ^^
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Reviewed By: Nenagh24 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 23, 2004 19:16 CDT
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YAY! New chapter! (Does a happy dance) I love your writing in this story! I can't wait for the next chapter in the story! Update soon! ^^
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Reviewed By: Reikka_Shinen [MediaMiner Member] On: July 18, 2004 12:57 CDT
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I'm addicted to this fic, if you don't update soon I might die!!
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Reviewed By: Nenagh24 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 18, 2004 10:34 CDT
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Oh...My...Gosh....THAT WAS SOO GOOD! Why aren't there any more reviews?!? This story is really original! I love all of your little author notes in the story! It really makes it your own. Please update soon!
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Reviewed By: FoXy_hOtTiE [MediaMiner Member] On: July 12, 2004 02:16 CDT
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cool
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Reviewed By: Reikka_Shinen [MediaMiner Member] On: July 05, 2004 16:23 CDT
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I really, really, like it. Plz, plz, plz, plz, plz, plz, plz, don't make it a self insertion. If you don't i will be eternally grateful. or you could post it again and change the "you" into "she".
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Reviewed By: Reikka_Shinen [MediaMiner Member] On: July 04, 2004 15:26 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I agree with Sheamaru-sama, you should start new paragraphs every once and a while. good story, update soon plz
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Reviewed By: Sheamaru-sama [MediaMiner Member] On: July 04, 2004 13:39 CDT
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Hm, I like your story. Continue as soon as you can. May I suggest that you start a new paragraph every once in a while. Block writing like that is hard on the eyes, so indent and enter everyonce in a while.
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