| "Eat You Alive" Reviews/Comments [ 32 ] |
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Reviewed By: Kawa-Misuterii [MediaMiner Member] On: June 18, 2008 16:16 CDT
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you know, I discovered you can always tell the difference between writers who play an instrument (they have a slight tendancy to go into more detail about the makeup of the song than they have to, stating guitar solos, crescendos, etc...) and the ones who just slap some lyrics in italics and call themselves deep. Anyway, totally enjoyed your story, I'm guessing your not going continue it seeing as the dates on your updates are a little old (I'm pretty sure I'm talking to myself here, actually) But in case you do still check your reviews, I just wanted to say you're doing a great job. One thing that brought me to write this....in chapter Bob (the first) you had one of the bands doing 'The Art of Losing' by American Hi-Fi. I just noticed that you happened to put the edited lyrics on, not the original. Here's a scrap from what I remember. 'Hey Ho, let's go, gonna start a riot, you don't want to fight it! One Two, Fuck you! Don't tell me what to do, I don't want to be like you. Can't you see, (in the edited version there's just a pause here, but in the original it says:) It's killing me? I'm my own worst enemy......that's basically the only few lines that get mutilated by the horror that is censorship. k, well, I tossed in my two cents, please don't throw them back at my head ^-^ again, great job, I hope you keep going with this one!
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Reviewed By: Inuyasha Baby_bre [MediaMiner Member] On: March 04, 2008 23:43 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
very professional...honestly your story should rank one of the top fanfics its awsome....But i hope ur going to make kagura sesshy's mate..plz....do so ......
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Title: WHERE ARE YOU!?!
Reviewed By: animefreak492 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 17, 2006 15:22 CDT
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PLEASE update soon. This is a really good story and if I need to, I will ell all of my Inuyasha-crazy friemds to read it 'cause I know that they will like it 'cause it's just that good. Please update soon. Thankz much.
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Title: KEHE
Reviewed By: Kagaga No Subaba [MediaMiner Member] On: December 07, 2005 09:55 CST
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Sorry had to reply to someone's review... and say your fics RAWKS!!! LMAO Kiki, you still have dance inside stuck on your head!? LMAO I luv ya sissy... and guess whatty??? I'm coming baaaack... kukukukuku how can you not know the AAR were from Oklahomie??? LOL Had to drive through that stae when I moved from MO... hated MO... now I have a southern twang to my voice... and I think I scare the Floridions here... lol My friend Megon lives in Ok... I think... or was that Arkansas??? Nope, she lives in OK. LOL Wow... rambling not good... Linz, Love the fic, love your stlye, love your work! And I know I can't possibly say something else because everyone else beat me to it. KUKUKU
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Title: LMFAO!!!!
Reviewed By: Kagaga No Subaba [MediaMiner Member] On: December 07, 2005 09:49 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OH MY FREAKIN GODS!!! If I could rate this any higher!!! HAHA!!! This is one of the best fics I think I have ever read! I love how you're so easy going with your work!!! With all the funny A/N in teh story and how you do the little @_@ LMAO!!! AHHH!!! IT'S PRICELESS!!! Wow... and I am getting freakishly overexcited... hehe, chicky I think you just got yourself a new loyal reviewer!! HAHA!!! I only apologize that I never stumbled across this amazing fic earlier! And I know how it feels to have actual guys read your fics... blew me away when I had a few of em read mine... I was like: Whoa!? Guys read IY fics!? HAHA I think they are a bit unappreciated around here... whatcha think? If you ever get the chance to read, check out my fics... or don't cuz they're kinda under hiatus... but once they are up! *Twiddles fingers like Mr. Burns* Yessss... reeeaaad... hehe. Alrighty then! I think I need to get back to editing crap for my english project... kehe. Hope your story gets more reviews because damn it deserves em! Luv ya lots! Sharlene... or Shar Shar AKA Kagaga No Subaba *Declares Dramatically*
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Title: I lost track of this for awhile...
Reviewed By: InuGrrrl [MediaMiner Member] On: November 27, 2005 21:30 CST
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But QuestionableIntentions sent me the link. Very nice! Loved the lemon, you had it going on! I liked the music choices too! Speaking of -I'm glad you liked submission. It was written at 5 am when i could barely keep my eyes open! The group is american. They're from the early 90's. I heard the song & was like, wow. Anyhoo, well done & i love the humourous a/ns. I didn't know the all american rejects were from oklahoma. Kewl ! :sings dance Inside -reminds me of InuYasha: Well done!
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Reviewed By: QuestionableIntentions [MediaMiner Member] On: November 22, 2005 19:14 CST
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w00t!! you really did write a lemon for this chapter! lol. i was hoping...been keeping up with this on ff.net, but i think i like it here better. that way i don't miss anything. ;) lol. great job, and i loved the chapter. hopefully more soon!!!
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Reviewed By: alatero [MediaMiner Member] On: October 13, 2005 01:41 CDT
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OMG! This is such a fun story! Please update again soon!
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Reviewed By: Princess-in-Training On: October 01, 2005 19:48 CDT
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Ahh I like your story.You should keep writing please!
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Reviewed By: inu-kagdude [MediaMiner Member] On: September 17, 2005 18:06 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
it is a great fic i have just been reading it nonstop it rocks
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Reviewed By: Kittycat78 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 26, 2005 22:08 CDT
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Wow your chapter was really good. It was funny how Kagome was stressing over what to wear so much but Inuyasha wasn't. And when Sango was cutting Miroku off was really funny as well. Well please update soon.
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Title: Okay I'm back...
Reviewed By: InuGrrrl [MediaMiner Member] On: August 23, 2005 08:28 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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I like it alot & you ofcourse have my fave pairings. I like the music selection, very good choices. Overall I think this is going to be a cute one. Loved the shippo stuff, him and Inu go at it no matter what age they are, lol.
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Title: Quick review before i read...
Reviewed By: InuGrrrl [MediaMiner Member] On: August 23, 2005 05:43 CDT
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Just wanted to say Wherever I May Roam RAWKS! I was actually going to use it in a fic, but you beat me to it. Great choice. Now i'm gonna read the fic...be back later :P
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Reviewed By: katt_jam On: July 25, 2005 01:18 CDT
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hey I love your story please update soon.
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Reviewed By: kag`n Inu On: February 23, 2005 14:51 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
hey i think your story is really great you should write more chapters. and soon i wanna know whats gunna happen
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