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| "I Got Game!" Reviews/Comments [ 35 ] | | Pages (3): [ 1 2 3 › » ] | Reviewed By: Shadow of Avalon [MediaMiner Member] On: January 28, 2007 04:29 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Holy crap! Was this a good story or what? I really enjoyed your OC's, damn were they well-written! I love Felicia...oooh...So cool! I hope she finds love eventually. Also, I have to admit, Quatre being all needy and shit, is actually really cute. It was annoying at the start, but he grew on me. I love your writing! Keep up the good work!
| Title: If only this were an original so I could buy it and keep it in my bookcase!
Reviewed By: MashiroYaisu On: October 26, 2004 08:32 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is a brilliant piece of art/fiction/work! First of all I'm amazed at how fast this seemed to have happened, aren't your fingers bleeding? Second... It's so good! I absolutely love it! You have a way with words that is amazing! The flow is great. The first chapter was a bit boring, because it took a while to get used to the pace and the whole thing. As in any story of this... this.. hugeness! :) The OCs are perfect, I love them! To wrap this up... You rock! Thank you so much! Keep up the excellent work! (or just retire and become a legend :)) //Mashiro
| Reviewed By: Dentelle noir On: October 12, 2004 08:23 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
I liked the read, it was such a different portrayal of the characters everyone has come to love and do a hundred ways. The ending was rather...abrupt, though. I can't help thinking that it was not done right. You left a lot of loose ends (Ex. the foreshadowing that the team would vote him off) I think you really should re-think your decision to end it like that. Give us an epilogue, expand it out, something! The sequel would be another completely different story line just in the same universe. I loved the story! Just, it was very abrupt.
| Reviewed By: TaylorMercury [MediaMiner Member] On: October 07, 2004 02:13 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
End? END?! Gah! As long as you're bringing out a sequel thingy, I'll be ok. I'm way too addicted to this story, and your characters, for my own health. Seriously. Yep yep, I be in the Jolly Old of Engerland. Obviously schoolish things are different here, but you know, kids can act just as dramatically. Although in a more English way. And yes, haha, I'm a hopeless romantic, so the sap didn't bother me at all. It wasn't too sappy, so no worries there! I'm mostly the same with hugs though, whoever attempts physical contact with me, gets a face full of hair (literally, its pretty long now). Aw, I'm sad to know this is the last chapter though! Damn. But I understand. I don't think it was bad at all, either! Gah, stupid Middie though, kicking his knee! the bitch! I'm glad Felicia managed to give her a good seeing to though. Wow, Quatre's really changed, well, he still whines but he's all . . . clingy. Like really clingy. It's kinda cute (hell, I think everything Quatre does is cute!) But, Trowa's going away? No wonder he's getting all sad and clingy. Really. Aww. Sad times for Quatre. Summer school! hahaha. I am not at all surprised! *shakes head* oh Quatre. This story has been wonderful to read, seriously, so damn entertaining, interesting, and different! I hope you're bringing out his sequel thingy REALLY soon, because, ah, I'm so attached to this all, dammit. Seriously. I think I need help. Anyroad, thankies for this! I look SO forward to more, sequel!!! ~ Myca
| Title: :)
Reviewed By: plah On: October 05, 2004 10:55 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
not to much criticism just a little bit. i agree with you on the une bit, those type of girls are everywhere but i say its about time quatre and trowa get over their past and move on.also thanks for finally lettin them say (143)
| Reviewed By: TaylorMercury [MediaMiner Member] On: October 05, 2004 05:19 CDT
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Eeeeeeeeee! Oh my! FINALLY!!! and, Quatre admitted it first! I didn't ever expect that! Oh god. It's so wonderfully adorable! Aw!!! Dammit. I love those two. I'm so so damn happy they finally shared that with each other! *wipes away a tear* and I noticed how Quatre was getting more affectionate. I like that. God, it's so lovely. YAY!!! Though, Quatre's poor knee! Damn, that must hurt! As long as he can get it fixed. That was a really good game though, really exciting! Middie though, interfering again! Grrr! And trying to get Triton to help her. Gah! She needs to just go obsess on someone else dammit, cause Trowa belongs to Quatre and she can't have him! I'm glad you've still got awhile to go with this though, I adore long stories, especially good ones. I'm here reading this all the way along you know! Oh, damn, I'm so, I'm giggling here and all happy happy about them though, in love! Aw! Damn. It's so wonderful. Eeeee! I can't wait for more! ~ Myca
| Reviewed By: precognition74 On: October 05, 2004 05:07 CDT
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oh gosh, they're so darn sappy!!! well, i don't think this kind of thing (runours and stuff) happens much in asian 'high schools' or their equivilent. it's a more conservative society. but well, it's interesting to about it. makes life interesting i guess. and we don't really have these cheerleader types, hell, cheerleading is not even a commonly recognised ECA. and since ALL schools in singapore wear a uniform with more or less very strict rules on uniform, we can't really judge people by the clothes they wear, they're all the same right down o the shoes and bags... very few designs to choose from.
| Reviewed By: silentnight On: October 04, 2004 21:37 CDT
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give the guys a break!!!!!ley them be happy for a chapter 8-)
| Title: ugh
Reviewed By: plah On: October 04, 2004 17:29 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
gawd its either up or down with trowa and quatre...i say just get everyone who is causin shit in the gym and kick their ass. ya would think trowa and quatre would just say fuck it to everyone and be happy for once since they are suppose to be in love eesh!
| Reviewed By: TaylorMercury [MediaMiner Member] On: October 04, 2004 14:52 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
You DO love driving me crazy, dont you? hahaha. I was so happy because last chapter they made up, and now! Ack, rumours! Horrible, hideous, hideous rumours! Middie must PAY for this trouble and pain she is causing! Ack, you write her so damn well, as well. She's so incredibly irritating, it makes me wish she were real only so I could kick her scheming arse! I really liked this chapter though, it was really interesting seeing how the rumour was thought up, started, and how it spread, and evolved, as rumours always, evilly so, tend to do. And gosh, whats up with Triton? You've given us a little twist there with him, haven't you? Now this should certainly prove interesting. I hope, if we do find out more about that side to him though, it doesn't involve Quatre, not in a pained way anyway! I hate when he's hurt. Awww. hahaha. As always, this is so incredibly gripping, dramatic, and just plain, well, entertaining! I'm enjoying this story more than I think is healthy for me. Haha. But, ah, seriously. I love this! I hope things can be resolved though! God, you write such interesting original characters too. They're just as real as the GW guys, which is great because usually OC's are all, 2-D and, unrealistic. Go you! You get full marks in my book for this. Now don't leave me hanging too long to find out what happens next! Lordy, Trowa's mad. He really shouldn't be though, Quatre & Felicia! Seriously! ~ Myca
| Reviewed By: silentnight On: October 02, 2004 14:04 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
i love the way quatre and trowa are portrayed in this fic. it is so original. they seem more human and real in this fic than in any other i have read. i can't wait to see where they end up. good work
| Reviewed By: TaylorMercury [MediaMiner Member] On: October 02, 2004 01:25 CDT
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Noooo, this is driving me crazy! Eeeee! This isn't fair, dammit? Quatre and Trowa HAVE to have it out, and talk, and make up! This is all so, dramatic, and, ack! Dammit, and Trowa kissed Middie back! Gaaah! Stupid boy. Stupid stupid boy. I want them to both just forget the damn girls, make up, and have phenomenal sex. Don't you? Haha, no, you being evil like this don't you? hehe ^_~ darnit. Course, this was a good chapter, not saying anythings wrong with it, but the current situation is so, frustrating! Gah! It's getting worse, and that isn't good! Not at all! They need to talk to each other. Really talk. And soon. Dammit, Middie pisses me off, haha. Goodness, this story is so, dramatic, and gripping. I think I like it too much. Please don't keep me waiting to long for the next chapter, I'm dying (as you should well know) to see what happens now, and for them to make up! ~ Myca
| Title: precognition74
Reviewed By: kagayaki-chan [MediaMiner Member] On: October 01, 2004 01:38 CDT
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eew! why would trowa do that for? i mean like quatre hasnt been very nice to him lately, but he's ought to be loyal to quatre. o4 needs some attitude adjustment though. when will heero, duo n wuffei com back out. they seem to have been MIA for quite a while. looking at felicia, i think trowa may be a lil' more talented at ball then he let on.
| Reviewed By: TaylorMercury [MediaMiner Member] On: October 01, 2004 01:01 CDT
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KISSING?! Ok, *takes a deep breath* it MUST be because Middie pounced on Trowa, like she usually does, the annoying little thing, following him around. He wasn't expecting it, she caught him off his guard. Yes. Haha, I'm hoping I'm right and that he's not willingly doing that! Bad Trowa if he is! But, ah, another dramatic and wonderful chapter! I was SO relieved when Trowa came along to help Quatre, god that was hot of him though, being all, like that. Their argument though, now that makes me sad and frustrated. dammit, I just want Quatre to, do something nice, or something, so that they go back to talking to each other and having phenomenal sex! hehehe. I think I was nearly as surprised as Quatre was at Felicia's skill there, I didn't expect that at all, but it was very interesting to see, especially since we don't really know very much about her. You DO bring out your chapters quickly, so I hope the same is true for the next, because I'm gonna be pretty much dying to find out what happens next, and why the hell Middie thinks she can kiss Quatre's goth like that! ~ Myca
| Reviewed By: Princess2000204 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 29, 2004 23:26 CDT
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I absolutely LOVE this fic!!!!! I'm notmally not a 3x4 fan but this fic made me see Quatre in a different light. I also like how you brought in all of the different names from GW. I hope you plane on updating really really soon!!!!!
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