| "Can't have the sweet without the bitter" Reviews/Comments [ 8 ] |
Reviewed By: kuroiyouko(not logged in) On: July 27, 2004 17:03 CDT
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I think the readers are supposed to read the author's note on the bottom, cause I DID say it was the end.
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Reviewed By: InusDemoness [MediaMiner Member] On: July 22, 2004 09:21 CDT
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Maybe you should go back and leave an author note on the other half of this story to tell your other readers that you're continuing it as a seperate story. Because I think they're waiting for you to update on the other half...
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Reviewed By: shorty14090 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 12, 2004 21:57 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love your story! It's great! Please update really soon!
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Reviewed By: kuroiyouko [MediaMiner Member] On: July 07, 2004 21:44 CDT
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Oh that's just great...shit- I mean sh*t. eheh...I'm used to cussing.
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Reviewed By: InusDemoness [MediaMiner Member] On: July 07, 2004 21:33 CDT
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Well the tags work on the reviews, hehe *laughs nervously* But they don't work in the cahpters I promise just go look!!!
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Reviewed By: InusDemoness [MediaMiner Member] On: July 07, 2004 21:32 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 6 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 7 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
I hate to tell you but the html tags don't work. I've tried it myself and for reason it just won't work. All you get is a chapter full of these: , etc. But why did you stop posting on the other half of the story??? It doesn't really make sense to put this up when you could have kept updating on the other one. But anyway I'm glad your even finishing your story. So many authors just forget them and leave them unfinished.
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Reviewed By: akuma_river [MediaMiner Member] On: July 07, 2004 19:44 CDT
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Interesting. Keep up the good work. Btw they haven't had sex yet?? I mean they love each other, in love with each other, living with each other. And they still haven't done it? Wow what a puritanic life style.
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Reviewed By: ang3lic_pl4ya(nsi) On: July 07, 2004 18:58 CDT
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LOVE IT!!! UPDATE SOON!!
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