| "The Shadow and the Shinobi" Reviews/Comments [ 14 ] |
Reviewed By: Ruri_Star [MediaMiner Member] On: March 28, 2005 13:38 CST
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up date soon!
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Reviewed By: Genkaimaster [MediaMiner Member] On: October 10, 2004 16:16 CDT
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Great story. Keep up the great work on the other site.
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Reviewed By: Ichiko Ran [MediaMiner Member] On: October 04, 2004 15:33 CDT
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Could you keep updating here as well please? E fiction doesn't like me....
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Reviewed By: _Nanashi_ (not signed in) On: October 04, 2004 00:47 CDT
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umm let's see...i don't wanna offend you or anything but i don't think this is a very good fic...the relationship with Hiei went way too fast...i mean they're mates before they've even know each other for more than one day! also simply telling the reader about a new character's past in a one paragraph block is never an effective or entertaining method...so yea...just my two cents...
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Reviewed By: Pyro Priestess [MediaMiner Member] On: October 02, 2004 21:13 CDT
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Your story is quite intersting, maybe you should start a new fic, that hasn't been up before to get more reviews. Thanks for your review. I appreciated it.
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Reviewed By: Ichiko Ran [MediaMiner Member] On: September 06, 2004 18:31 CDT
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T_T Update please!!!! UPDATE!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: Noshicat [MediaMiner Member] On: July 25, 2004 10:39 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hi! I like the fic, it's good! I hope you'll update again soon, this is pretty interesting.
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Reviewed By: Ichiko Ran [MediaMiner Member] On: July 23, 2004 23:36 CDT
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Another week of waiting for the next chapter. thas just great. Anyways great chapter! a little short but I wont complain, I still liked it. Update asap. please and thank you (if you do that is)
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Reviewed By: Ichiko Ran [MediaMiner Member] On: July 23, 2004 02:26 CDT
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I CANT WAIT ANYMORE! PLEASE UPDATE SOON!!!
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Reviewed By: Ichiko Ran [MediaMiner Member] On: July 22, 2004 00:22 CDT
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Why must you take so long in updating this!sorry if pressuring you...HURRY THE FUCK UP!ummm sorry again...he he he ^.^;
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Reviewed By: Ichiko Ran [MediaMiner Member] On: July 19, 2004 21:09 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I like! you are a good auithor. I am adding this to my favorites! I'll tell my friend about this, they'll like it. Please update soon! ^_^ My dance! oh yeah! bust a move!
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Reviewed By: Reikka_Shinen [MediaMiner Member] On: July 16, 2004 19:24 CDT
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it was good, but i think that you made hiei fall in love with the reader to soon. but thats just my opinion.
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Reviewed By: MaekoRyoko On: July 14, 2004 23:20 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
coolstoryness. update fatser please..... *waits...* *die's of waiting* *thinks about HIEI* *faints*
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Reviewed By: red_orb_of_live On: July 10, 2004 12:51 CDT
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cool please update soon
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