| "Penance" Reviews/Comments [ 4 ] |
Reviewed By: Amberkins On: July 09, 2004 02:10 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
You need to work on editing your fan fics better, Mary. Other then that, it is a great start! I hope you work more on it or I'll spam your LJ. Good luck and take care.
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Reviewed By: Jadies On: July 09, 2004 01:51 CDT
Comment/Review:
Y'know hon, you should be careful about writing things like that. Sure, I can handle a nosebleed, but think of all the poor people who can't recover from the blood-loss as quickly as I can! Awesome fic Akira, I can't wait to read the continuation. Long live S&M!
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Reviewed By: Dustin Hunt On: July 09, 2004 00:00 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I also agree with Ardwynna it was over too soon which made me a sad panda but the kinkyness factor made me a happy panda.
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Reviewed By: Ardwynna [MediaMiner Member] On: July 08, 2004 03:18 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
How could you stop there? That was hot! The first part really could do with a closer proof reading but I can't fault the kink. If anything, it was over too soon!
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