| "Beauties and the Beasts" Reviews/Comments [ 4 ] |
Reviewed By: Moon Angel [MediaMiner Member] On: May 23, 2006 15:15 CDT
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really great beginning please update soon!!!
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Reviewed By: Amy_Rose(not logged in yet) On: April 09, 2005 19:25 CDT
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I like this story! Is it possible to be a little bit more discriptive? Just an opinion. It was very creative to do Beauty and the Beast with Yu-Gi-Oh!. Keep up the good work!
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Reviewed By: Goddess Hotaru On: January 14, 2005 00:49 CST
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You go I really odd story.
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Reviewed By: DemonandGoddess [MediaMiner Member] On: July 08, 2004 16:16 CDT
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Interesting. One thing: Could you try to make your sentences more descriptive? Sentences like'Bakura got up and tried to attack Lovely.' doesn't sound as exciting as I think it should. Just an opinion. I look forward to your next chapter.
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