| "Needless Secrets" Reviews/Comments [ 10 ] |
Title: Wonderful fic~
Reviewed By: Saerafina [MediaMiner Member] On: July 26, 2006 19:15 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is a wonderfully-written fic. It stays in character, and I love the progression of their relationship, it just feels so typically them, and so sweet. I'm glad you didn't carry any of their personality traits to the extreme, and instead blended them all together so they really felt whole. I really felt all the love, and the discomfort they felt, it really took me into the story, and I loved it so much! Please do let me know if you ever write any more Full Metal Panic fanfics, I'll be sure to read them :) I can't think of anything bad to say about it at all, this was by far my most favorite story of them together, and I'm definitely adding it to my favorites~! I love it!
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Reviewed By: lildaemon On: July 22, 2005 23:01 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
hehehehehe... that was an absolutely adorable story!!! i was immediately drawn into it... and your organization and protrayl of the characters kept me reading! your use of humour was awesome, and i REALLY loved your ending. the character development was amazingly done... great job!! keep writing!!
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Title: Miss
Reviewed By: Kachie-chan On: April 25, 2005 00:57 CDT
Comment/Review:
That was cute, well written, and enchanting.
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Reviewed By: FMP Fan On: April 14, 2005 04:01 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
The entire flow of the story is convincing--I could really picture this happening, as if it were directly from the show. The story is believable, the dialogue and character behaviors and reactions are believable, and it was an absolute joy to read. This is a rare gem--you are very talented. Thanks for writing this fic!
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Reviewed By: FMP Fan On: April 14, 2005 03:57 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
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Title: Review of
Reviewed By: Thev On: July 14, 2004 17:17 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
YAY! This was a truly delightful fanfiction. There are too few good fanfictions for any story (let alone Full Metal Panic) out there. Please continue this story. (I don't suppose you could have Chidori relent and express her love publicly? The Sgt. deserves a happy ending.) Ciao! :-)
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Reviewed By: thekoostuff On: July 14, 2004 17:14 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
awwwww...i hope hte next chapter comes out soon and their relationship gets better! keep up the good work! updatee soon! ^_^
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Reviewed By: thekoostuff On: July 14, 2004 17:05 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
wow!! this is an AWESOME START! i love the way you started the story!! keep up the great job! ^_^
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Title: Wow! ^_^
Reviewed By: pin [MediaMiner Member] On: July 13, 2004 22:58 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This fanfiction is captivating. Very well written. I love how the words "flow" as I read them. I can't wait until you update. Keep up the excellent writing. ^_^
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Reviewed By: Utena fan On: July 11, 2004 16:57 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really loved this. There is really too little Full Metal Panic fanfiction, and very little of it is up to this standard. Can't wait for more chapters.
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