| "A Tainted Soul" Reviews/Comments [ 9 ] |
Title: a tainted soul
Reviewed By: mysterylady_tx [MediaMiner Member] On: February 18, 2004 06:03 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
WOW!!! i can honestly say that i read the beginning to this a LONG LONG LONG time ago and chatpers 2 and 3 were new to me i wonder did you ever continue this??? cause it is a FANTASTIC STORY i hope you do continue it///THANKS:D ERika
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Reviewed By: jster1983 On: January 26, 2004 15:31 CST
Comment/Review:
Technically Shingo is her Half-brother all tough I think that Soun might have done it to her again 3 years after old meatball head was born.
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Reviewed By: duo's mrs. fluffie bunnie On: February 04, 2003 21:18 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
*whines* it was getting good! *pouts* u better finish or i shall ....uhh....oi never mind! well will ranma/usagi be a pair? or will it be rouga(sp?)/usagi? well write more!!! ^-^ |
Reviewed By: Brian On: November 29, 2002 01:49 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 5 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 6 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 6 of 10
Overall Rating: 6 of 10 Comment/Review:
There are some grammar/spelling problems (a few homonyms or near-homonyms, so forth); but more importantly, there are some scenes that seem far too short for their effect. In other words, it felt like the plot was driving the story, rather than developing out of the characters.
It didn't feel like the story was irreparable; but in its current state, it has some problems. |
Reviewed By: Yuyen [MediaMiner Member] On: November 10, 2002 21:34 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
MORE!!!!! More, more, more!!!!!!!!!! |
Reviewed By: Seleny On: November 01, 2002 09:38 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I just love it. Cant wait for next chapter. Hope Serena and Ranma get together. |
Reviewed By: Firefly-chan On: July 06, 2002 13:37 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I loved it! I can't wait for more! Please get it out soon! Your a wonderful author! |
Reviewed By: Falconess [MediaMiner Member] On: January 22, 2002 20:22 CST
Comment/Review:
This is soooo good. I love it. Please write more |
Reviewed By: EternalMoonPrincess On: August 30, 2001 12:49 CDT
Comment/Review:
I LOVE IT SO FAR!!!! Please write more soon! Though I would be more likely to see it on FanFiction.net. Do you post stories there? |
