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 Title: My Characters Two Souls Profile Did A very Good Job on this fic Torture Botan
Reviewed By: Angel of Anime and Demons and Crossovers [MediaMiner Member]  On: September 08, 2005 13:35 CDT
Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
Comment/Review: I want Hiei,Larva,Inuyasha and Sesshie.!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Names because she has two souls Goddess of the Elements and Artemis Looks When she is Artemis she has Pink hair and Purple eyes When she is in Goddess form she has silver hair with gold and black streaks She also has eyes that are silver with Gold and Blue specks not a lot She has 12 Pure white kitsune tails with a different color on the tip of each of them She has Pure white Kitsune ears And she has Gold Dragon Wings with Black and silver veins in them She has a curvaceous body Luscious it is with curves in all the right places She alwys wears a white short kimono ya know with a short skirt It comes up to her thighs It has Silver Gold and Pink flowers on it Nothing else is short though Stop Mocking Me Anyways she is all elemental Demon Goddess And you did a very good job PLEASE TORTURE BOTAN!
 Title: My Characters Two Souls Profile Did A very Good Job on this fic Torture Botan
Reviewed By: Angel of Anime and Demons and Crossovers [MediaMiner Member]  On: September 08, 2005 13:32 CDT
Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
I want Hiei,Larva,Inuyasha and Sesshie Names because she has two souls Goddess of the Elements and Artemis Looks When she is Artemis she has Pink hair and Purple eyes When she is in Goddess form she has silver hair with gold and black streaks She also has eyes that are silver with Gold and Blue specks not a lot She has 12 Pure white kitsune tails with a different color on the tip of each of them She has Pure white Kitsune ears And she has Gold Dragon Wings with Black and silver veins in them She has a curvaceous body Luscious it is with curves in all the right places She alwys wears a white short kimono ya know with a short skirt It comes up to her thighs It has Silver Gold and Pink flowers on it Nothing else is short though Stop Mocking Me Anyways she is all elemental Demon Goddess And you did a very good job PLEASE TORTURE BOTAN!
 Reviewed By: Guess who?  On: August 23, 2004 23:17 CDT
Comment/Review:
Don't be MEAN TO ME!!! Ahem, that said, let's get the party started, LITERALLY!! WAHOO! Who's bringing the sugar related products? Maybe during the shopping you can trick Ryuu into wearing the pink shirt you wanted her to wear, then again, that was SOOOOOOO long ago, you probably don't remember. I think she would look good in a black brides rose dress, what do you think? Or maybe that would fit you? Will you burn FINALLY BURN Ryuuu's jacket and her sweater which she CONSTANTLY WEARS?!!!! She must have transparent skin from all the stuffy darkness her clothes provide. Ohhh! I know, take her bathing suit shopping!!!! And have a TINY camera installed in her dressing room, so Seto can watch her! * Thinks ecchi thoughts* Oh dear, what have I become. Ah well, JA NE!! * then proceeds to wander into walls laughing hysterically. I tend to do that a lot, ne?*
 Reviewed By: Guess who?  On: August 23, 2004 23:08 CDT
Comment/Review:
Don't be MEAN TO ME!!! Ahem, that said, let's get the party started, LITERALLY!! WAHOO! Who's bringing the sugar related products? Maybe during the shopping you can trick Ryuu into wearing the pink shirt you wanted her to wear, then again, that was SOOOOOOO long ago, you probably don't remember. I think she would look good in a black brides rose dress, what do you think? Or maybe that would fit you? Will you burn FINALLY BURN Ryuuu's jacket and her sweater which she CONSTANTLY WEARS?!!!! She must have transparent skin from all the stuffy darkness her clothes provide. Ohhh! I know, take her bathing suit shopping!!!! And have a TINY camera installed in her dressing room, so Seto can watch her! * Thinks ecchi thoughts* Oh dear, what have I become. Ah well, JA NE!! * then proceeds to wander into walls laughing hysterically. I tend to do that a lot, ne?*
 Title: i wanna join tooo!
Reviewed By: xXdArKn3sSxWitHinXx [MediaMiner Member]  On: August 08, 2004 23:13 CDT
Comment/Review:
Name:Rynna Age:17 Species:Fire/Ice demon wolf Eye color: one red one blue Hair color: Black with blue and red streaks Clothes: Black off the shoulder top with blue letters that read 'i need supervision', dark blue hiphugger jeans, black shoes, loose black collar with a silver wolf charm. Looks: Hair is shoulder length, little wolf ears on top of head, big lush tail that is black and has 1 red stripe and 1 blue stripe going down opposite sides, fangs. Personality: Arrogant, Aggressive, Helpful, laid back, nosy, covers emotions with random things, very sensitive, loves to draw, write and rock music calms her nerves, loves to dance. If you can, could you pair me with Kiba! Please and Thank you!
 Reviewed By: Fallens Lovin Angel [MediaMiner Member]  On: July 23, 2004 13:52 CDT
Rating(s):
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
Name:Kasy Age:16 History:happy go lucky can be a bit naive biggy on Optimast Parents never knew dad mom commited sucide Looks:Baby blue eyes Pale Skin Lavender hair either in ponytail or down always wearing Bikini top and hip huggers that slide down a bit to show 2 straps that go to the Bikini Bottem and wears sneakers tan Bikini black pants Personality:well Angel says im Naive and im to cherry and optimastic and i love making friends to much i also get hurt easily Magic:i can heal people and grow flowers but i dont really do damage Paired with:Jin please oh write soon please
 Reviewed By: Fallin Dark Angel [MediaMiner Member]  On: July 13, 2004 14:06 CDT
Comment/Review:
Name:Fallin Dark Angel (just call me Angel) age:567 But look 15 *thank god for demonic aging* Clothes:all black leather pants tank top and black jacket that stops just below my breast fighting gloves and black shoes Personality:i like to have fun low self-esteem usally cold to people that arent my friends could probly compete and win against tyson on an eating contest eats a LOT loves suger gets hyper though dosnt really talk past very hard to get me to cry usally laid back (usally) very fiary spirted hotheaded stubborn will constently flirt with my guy but if he actully does somthing will get extremly shy due to low-self esteem History:Abodened and hated by parents offically disclaimed was an assaian for a while got out that to much dirty dealing What you look like:Black Hairs always in a braid Crystal Blue eyes that people say look haunted Elf ears burned imprint of angel wings on back tatoo of a shatered heart in barbwire on shoulder Attaks:I can purify evil i have small manipulation on plants if i do certian dances i can create a fire that can burn anything i can sometimes mix it with my purifying powers im also master at all my weapons and am extramly fast i can even summon 2 fire hell dogs Weapons:a whip that is stronger than most black a bow that dosnt need arrows i can concentrate fire and my purify powers and thats its arrows a sword like on final fantasy10 that tidus uses except black that i can summon Guy i want:Yuuska Urameshi i want to go shoppig please
 Title: kurama'svixen
Reviewed By: YokosVixen [MediaMiner Member]  On: July 12, 2004 17:20 CDT
Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
Wow. I did well. Can I be in my story? I can. YES!! I get to be in my own story! This will be lots of fun. I have so many plans for this that the sleepover could be a month long. JA NE!
 Title: Can I be in it?
Reviewed By: Yamifanner(not logged in)  On: July 11, 2004 22:27 CDT
Comment/Review:
Hello. I would love to be in your story. Name:Jacquelyn Age:16 Hair color:waist length black hair with golden brown highlights Eye color:blue-green Paired with:Yami. I hope you update soon. Ja Ne.

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